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your skin …

cornflow’r in the moonlite
through louvers that
slice you to tender shards
of opalescence
arranged like piano keys on
Egyptian percale
the sea of sheets we so
often drown in …
“oh baby” -
the way you say those words -
soft candle puffs
as if turning flame to wisps
coyly chasing my name from
where I thought it safe
to its utter peril upon your lips
and its baptism by the
kiss that slays …
my rapture is no longer my own
it exists only in chaos
at the source of the divine -
the wellspring
that indescribable place of
wilding wonder …
and yet …
at this moment of contentment and
joy and security -
where we are timeless and true
where every hour is midnight …
a tear leaps from my chin to its doom
unnoticed by you with
my back strategically to the moon …
because I know with certainty
(though I don’t know HOW)
that someday I’ll be alone -
someday I’ll be drenched by the same moon
remembering this very moment
remembering that I knew
that solitude would be my fate … 
that I would one day ache
for the gentle, whisp’ry way
you said …

“oh baby”.







Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, January 24, 2024

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Date: 3/15/2024 1:02:00 PM
Hey G back for a visit and thoroughly enjoyed this! Hey, Did you see Rick Beatos latest interview? First Michael McDonald, today George Benson, who's next Gino Vanelli?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2024 5:49:00 PM
Thanks, Buddy! Yes, he should interview Gino - he has featured his music many times and is such a knowledgeable guy, I would think Gino would get along with him well. I’ll check out George - haven’t seen it yet.
Date: 1/25/2024 12:56:00 PM
Dear Gregory, firstly your title drew me in and got me intrigued to read more as a moon lover i couldn resist, and secondly, this poem is just magnificent! So enchantingly ethereal with such soulful depth in the imagery youve painted in such a creative manner. Truly loved every word in this especially the ending is so soul hitting! And poignant and felt so sincerely woven. And the opening lines, your metaphors are so unique! I saw this on fb too, dark poetry page. And i must say this is a fave
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2024 9:45:00 AM
This means a lot to me, my friend, thank you so very much. I am not able to spend a lot of time here like I once did, so comments are few, if any. Blessings to you - you made my day!
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