His Evening's Mystery

And my eyes are beguiled to climb into the grace of his evening’s mystery , likened to a fragrant embrace so radiant in its spell : that I glide through a cruise of dreams, enchanting as summer's warm river flowing gently into me. His whispers bid my lips closer while the musky dew, the moist hush quenches us into the moonlight; bestowing duskfall, our communion... that from morn beginning, love's silence holds me tenderly nourished. Best romantic write May-July 2017 Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Reposted 7/26/2018
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Barden Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Oh, this is so exquisite and charming, Nette - I am such a fan of your writing! This is fav-ing ... congrats on your win, my friend! <3
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Greetings, Nette. Congrats for your WIN this wonderful piece! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:00 PM
A sensual delight Nette! Congratulations on your placement my friend! : )
Lane Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Well done and congrats on your placement.
Nusker Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Sweetness spills out from this romantic poem. Congrats on your win, Nette.
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Congrats Nette on another fine win in my premium contest.
Makama Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
Em Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Marvelous! You sweeten the love pot especially the soft ending!
Green Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Incredibly beautiful and enchanting. Your words touch my heart in its most vulnerable spot Nette. This was gorgeous.
Turner Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Sounds like the perfect evening, nette. So romantic!
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:00 AM
This is very nice Nette :) Beautifully written.
Gupta Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Let the tender nourishment continue ... in the fragrant embrace milieu ... the whole poem has an excellent love hue ...
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June 27, 2017 at 3:36 AM
- Lovely and romantic, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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