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His Evening's Mystery

And my eyes are beguiled to climb into the grace of his evening’s mystery , likened to a fragrant embrace so radiant in its spell : that I glide through a cruise of dreams, enchanting as summer's warm river flowing gently into me. His whispers bid my lips closer while the musky dew, the moist hush quenches us into the moonlight; bestowing duskfall, our communion... that from morn beginning, love's silence holds me tenderly nourished. Best romantic write May-July 2017 Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Reposted 7/26/2018

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Date: 7/29/2017 5:28:00 PM
Oh, this is so exquisite and charming, Nette - I am such a fan of your writing! This is fav-ing ... congrats on your win, my friend! <3
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Date: 7/28/2017 6:20:00 AM
Greetings, Nette. Congrats for your WIN this wonderful piece! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2017 11:00:00 PM
A sensual delight Nette! Congratulations on your placement my friend! : )
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Date: 7/27/2017 10:19:00 AM
Well done and congrats on your placement.
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Date: 7/27/2017 10:10:00 AM
Sweetness spills out from this romantic poem. Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 7/27/2017 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Nette on another fine win in my premium contest.
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:09:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Date: 6/27/2017 12:34:00 PM
Marvelous! You sweeten the love pot especially the soft ending!
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Date: 6/27/2017 12:19:00 PM
This has an amorous appeal that just enchants me. Again you excel and enthrall !
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Date: 6/27/2017 12:11:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful and enchanting. Your words touch my heart in its most vulnerable spot Nette. This was gorgeous.
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Date: 6/27/2017 9:41:00 AM
Sounds like the perfect evening, nette. So romantic!
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Date: 6/27/2017 8:00:00 AM
This is very nice Nette :) Beautifully written.
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Date: 6/27/2017 6:32:00 AM
Let the tender nourishment continue ... in the fragrant embrace milieu ... the whole poem has an excellent love hue ...
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Date: 6/27/2017 3:36:00 AM
- Lovely and romantic, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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