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Rainless Clouds

Rainless clouds are drifting by As I stand in solitude, There in the dark deep grey sky, They mirror my somber mood; As I stand in solitude, Sunless clouds are feeling dry, They mirror my somber mood, As they go past with a sigh; Sunless clouds are feeling dry, And they are doing no good, As they go past with a sigh, Leaving me alone to brood; And they are doing no good, There in the dark deep grey sky, Leaving me alone to brood, Rainless clouds are drifting by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/18/2017 10:55:00 AM
Lovely example of the form, Jo. Has a definitely depth and sadness to it... hope the clouds soon part to bathe you in Sol's light! Regards, John.
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Date: 7/4/2017 10:58:00 AM
Great poem with a nice picture to go with it. Your trying rain-less clouds with your somber mood hits the right note.
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Date: 6/24/2017 3:23:00 PM
I love this, Jo - lyrical and mysterious pantoum ... such beauty in its dark tresses ... LOVELY! A fav for sure!
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Date: 6/17/2017 12:25:00 PM
Sad but fabulous poem. You did so well with this form, Jo.
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Date: 6/4/2017 5:26:00 PM
what a great pantoum poem, Jo. You did it very well. I really enjoy the form and you showed us how to do a good one.
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Date: 6/4/2017 3:51:00 PM
what a languid song that makes my heart quiver.. very sullenly beautiful, jo.. huggs
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Date: 6/4/2017 3:49:00 PM
what a mellow, poignant song that makes my heart quiver.. very beautiful, jo.. huggs
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Date: 6/4/2017 10:29:00 AM
Darkness and solitude can easily put us in a somber mood, Jo! Your rainless clouds have served their purpose...even without water, a lovely poem has sprouted! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:37:00 AM
So deep dark and dramatic Jo - days like this can make us feel down I love the sad imagery you have used... lets hope for brighter days ahead:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/4/2017 3:57:00 AM
Brava Jo! This form can read so tedious and boring if it is not done right. That is why I never write them. : ) You didn't excellent job on this. 7
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Date: 6/3/2017 2:24:00 PM
Like the way yo wrote this. 7 and more. I know they took the scoring away. Thanks for reading my " YOU" :)
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Date: 6/3/2017 8:05:00 AM
I understand . It is another gray, overcast morning here. I hope you see the sun soon :)
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