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So here I am late at night, on October 14, 2015, and I just became a Premium Member. I couldn't be happier to be a part of something so amazing. Since I have started posting poems on Poetry Soup, I have had a renewed sense of passion for writing. I started writing simple poems in 4th grade (Basically poems of boys I had crushes on that particular day). That's about the time I started journaling. To this day I still keep a journal but now it's saved on my hard drive. I have over 36 journals since 1990. As I got older, my poetry started taking a different avenue with the form of flow and style. My junior year of High School I won a poetry contest and it was published in a book consisting of over 250 pages of raw poetry from high school students all over the country. My old school uses that book in English Literature class as of 2000. Needless to say, it was at that exact moment I heard the wind whisper my name and I felt my passion for writing has gone far beyond a high school class collection book. I met my husband in 1995 (at age 15) and have been together ever since. Over 20 years to be exact, and I am only 35 years old. My love and our passion for each other continues to grow daily. Our cute love relationship turned into marriage at age 22, and just celebrated 13 years last week. Most of my work is a reflection on the honest love we share as a couple and as an individual. He moves me in ways I never thought could happen. I love him as deep as the deepest sea's flow, and the most beautiful part of this story is that I know he feels the same about me. Over the years we have been keeping our own special "Nick & Laura" journal. Whenever we feel like expressing our feelings we keep it in that journal. We've collected over 1,200 cards and love letters. I know one day my daughter will grow up and learn about "true love". She sees it everyday as we communicate and respect each other the way we do in everyday activities. Being together for 2o years has given us so many cherish able memories. With that, we have faced a ton of trials, loss, money hardship, and brokenness. When I write about him words alone can not be expressed and that is why I am constantly writing about him or us as one unit. We have lost 2 sisters, 4 grandparents, 5 cousins and 2 friends over the span of 20 years. But, one thing I have definitely learned is that I can turn a "lesson" into a "blessing. I have no choice but to keep moving forward and trust my faith in the Lord will carry me through, as He always has done. I am so humbled because I know where I came from, and where I am today. I enjoy reading all the poems you guys post. Most of my time is reading and commenting because I enjoy it so much. I am learning so much also. I have never really had proper "schooling" on writing poetry, but I am slowly learning. I hope my poems will convey my utmost passion for my life, loss and love. My inspiration comes from a deep core inside my heart, and from all you poets on Poetry Soup. So thank you very much for all your kind comments, my confidence is slowly peeking through. I am still a tiny bit insecure because I have never had anyone really read my poems except my family and my husband. It's so refreshing to see everyone's views and beliefs are encouraging and I am grateful I stumbled upon this amazing group of talented poets. Thank you for reading my poems and be blessed. :) -Laura

Autumn Haiku Finalized

Blog Posted:9/20/2016 4:23:00 PM



About 6 got NA because of no date or wrong syllable count :)

Below are the winners:

  Place PoemTitle Poet
Contest Winner Medal 1 Haiku- Autumn Broken Wings
Contest Winner Medal 1 autumn's rhapsody nette onclaud
Contest Winner Medal 1 AUTUMN MELODY Anulaxmi Nayak
Contest Winner Medal 1 Girl in the Autumn Woods Andrea Dietrich
Contest Winner Medal 1 AUTUMN JAN ALLISON
Contest Winner Medal 1 Autumn Haiku Janis Thompson
Contest Winner Medal 1 Parched Leaves of Season Moon Flower
Contest Winner Medal 1 Autumn consumed Mark Paul van der Merwe
Contest Winner Medal 1 full moon of autumn Rick Parise
Contest Winner Medal 1 Autumn Sandra Haight
Contest Winner Medal 2 Fiery Arbour Sarban Bhattacharya
Contest Winner Medal 2 Autumn Agnes Krampe
Contest Winner Medal 2 Autumn arrives Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Contest Winner Medal 2 autumn San Woo
Contest Winner Medal 2 Autumnal Nights SEREN ROBERTS
Contest Winner Medal 2 Autumn Splendor Robert L. Hinshaw
Contest Winner Medal 2 Red Flame Autumn Equinox Nayda Ivette Negron
Contest Winner Medal 2 Haiku 48 - Autumn Kim Merryman
Contest Winner Medal 2 Indian summer Connie Marcum Wong
Contest Winner Medal 3 Haiku: Cool Windy Day Janice Canerdy
Contest Winner Medal 3 Halloween Trees david mohn
Contest Winner Medal 3 Autumn Butterfly Tim Ryerson
Contest Winner Medal 3 Autumn Sara Chansarkar
Contest Winner Medal 3 Autumn Haiku Probir Gupta

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Date: 9/20/2016 10:03:00 PM
Autumn is my favorite time of year. Thank you, Laura, for sponsoring this contest and for my placement. Blessings!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/21/2016 7:03:00 AM
- my favorite time too Kim! Thanks for your participation lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 7:14:00 PM
I just read them all. I loved it. Thanks so much for having this contest. Congrats to all.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2016 8:34:00 PM
thanks for your lovely entry :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 6:49:00 PM
I enjoyed reading the different haiku. All the images of autumn were colorful and vivid. Congratulations to the winners. Great contest, luloo.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thanks for your beautiful entry :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 5:20:00 PM
Laura, I loved writing for your contest, my muse was set free, thanks for my awesome win, so honored ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2016 5:46:00 PM
thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 9/20/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thanks for my top spot Luloo and many congrats to all the winners I have read some very beautiful traditional haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2016 5:46:00 PM
you're welcome, well deserved :)-luloo

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