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Never Seeing the Truth

The electricity between us was spontaneous Which did intrigue me because I never thought it tangible.... Others would patronize me for this love happened so fast Only until some had a revelation did they see our love was true Others had a fixation and if they didn't navigate through these thoughts in the right way they were destined to fall into a portal of denial never seeing the truth Sponsor:John Hamilton Contest: 8 word challenge Date:1/26/2020

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/6/2020 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful work! Congrats on your win!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:01:00 PM

Thank you!;)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/4/2020 11:11:00 PM

Tough Challenge. All the best.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2020 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Anisha yes it was a tough challenge;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2020 3:31:00 PM

Nicely done, Brenda! Congrats!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2020 5:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim!;)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 2/1/2020 10:10:00 AM

Wow, you created a masterpiece ..So spontaneously the words have been weaved into a great write

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so very much!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/31/2020 12:34:00 PM

This is a special write Brenda, outstanding how you used the eight words in such a succinct way, not detracting at all from the beauty and brevity of this write. Congrats on another fine win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/31/2020 12:40:00 PM

John thank you so very much!;) much appreciated!;)

John Fleming

Date: 1/30/2020 8:55:00 AM

Another contest entry -- and a very good one at that! I have to agree with Lu Loo, Brenda...I too think John will very much appreciate the poem also. In much affection. :) john P.s Good luck with your excellent efforts!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 7:08:00 PM

Thank you for your continued support John! I will always appreciate your comments! Much affection!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/29/2020 6:23:00 AM

Brilliance at its peaks!! Congratulations Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Swetha!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2020 1:34:00 AM

This is an amazing entry for this contest Brenda I would imagine this is a sure win, the last two lines say it all. Well penned my friend, Blessings

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer I appreciate that!;)

Lu Loo

Date: 1/27/2020 8:53:00 AM

wow great usage of all 8 words lovely Brenda! John will love this, good luck x:-)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/27/2020 9:08:00 AM

Haha thx Laura! I really appreciate your visit!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2020 6:13:00 AM

Incorporating prompt words in a poem has never been my forte, Brenda, but you have accomplished that with apparent ease! Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/27/2020 7:49:00 AM

Lol Paul thank you so much! You have been a good friend!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this with your poetic words: "destined to fall into a portal of denial never seeing the truth..." God bless you. Thanks likewise for your comments for my poems.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:36:00 PM

Thank you so much!;)