Home » Poems » Brenda Chiri » Never Seeing the Truth

Never Seeing the Truth

The electricity between us was spontaneous Which did intrigue me because I never thought it tangible.... Others would patronize me for this love happened so fast Only until some had a revelation did they see our love was true Others had a fixation and if they didn't navigate through these thoughts in the right way they were destined to fall into a portal of denial never seeing the truth Sponsor:John Hamilton Contest: 8 word challenge Date:1/26/2020

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/6/2020 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful work! Congrats on your win!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:01:00 PM

Thank you!;)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/4/2020 11:11:00 PM

Tough Challenge. All the best.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2020 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Anisha yes it was a tough challenge;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2020 3:31:00 PM

Nicely done, Brenda! Congrats!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2020 5:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim!;)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 2/1/2020 10:10:00 AM

Wow, you created a masterpiece ..So spontaneously the words have been weaved into a great write

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so very much!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/31/2020 12:34:00 PM

This is a special write Brenda, outstanding how you used the eight words in such a succinct way, not detracting at all from the beauty and brevity of this write. Congrats on another fine win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/31/2020 12:40:00 PM

John thank you so very much!;) much appreciated!;)

John Fleming

Date: 1/30/2020 8:55:00 AM

Another contest entry -- and a very good one at that! I have to agree with Lu Loo, Brenda...I too think John will very much appreciate the poem also. In much affection. :) john P.s Good luck with your excellent efforts!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 7:08:00 PM

Thank you for your continued support John! I will always appreciate your comments! Much affection!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/29/2020 6:23:00 AM

Brilliance at its peaks!! Congratulations Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Swetha!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2020 1:34:00 AM

This is an amazing entry for this contest Brenda I would imagine this is a sure win, the last two lines say it all. Well penned my friend, Blessings

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer I appreciate that!;)

Lu Loo

Date: 1/27/2020 8:53:00 AM

wow great usage of all 8 words lovely Brenda! John will love this, good luck x:-)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/27/2020 9:08:00 AM

Haha thx Laura! I really appreciate your visit!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2020 6:13:00 AM

Incorporating prompt words in a poem has never been my forte, Brenda, but you have accomplished that with apparent ease! Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/27/2020 7:49:00 AM

Lol Paul thank you so much! You have been a good friend!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this with your poetic words: "destined to fall into a portal of denial never seeing the truth..." God bless you. Thanks likewise for your comments for my poems.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:36:00 PM

Thank you so much!;)