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Autumn arrives

Autumn haiku a pleasant breeze soothes hues of orange mesmerise crispy yellow leaves ... maple morning crush a carpet of ripened fruits gold reflects in eyes ... Written Oct 22nd, 2015 Sponsor- SKAT A Now entered for "Autumn haiku" contest by Laura loo

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Date: 9/22/2016 4:24:00 PM
Beautifully written, Upma! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:35:00 PM
I love the sound of maple morning crush!! reminds me of orange crush drink!! Long time , no see, Upma. How are you.
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Date: 9/20/2016 4:24:00 PM
these are very beautiful lines Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2016 4:09:00 PM
Dr. Upma "gold reflects in eyes"....loved that line :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
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Date: 10/25/2015 2:24:00 AM
A lovely and an extreme interesting write my friend. It is very beautiful. Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
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Date: 10/23/2015 8:52:00 PM
Lovely. I especially enjoyed the maple morning crush line!
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Date: 10/23/2015 7:38:00 PM
Hi Upma I hope you are well I have been missing you!Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:50:00 PM
Stunning, Dr. Upma!.. Too luck in the contest...
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:53:00 AM
This is simply beautiful, Dr Upma. So So sweet....I loved every line. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:08:00 AM
Wonderful write, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, a 7 and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/23/2015 7:44:00 AM
Very nice Dr Sharma. Wonderful write. Of an Autumn day.
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