Autumn Arrives

Autumn haiku





a pleasant breeze soothes
hues of orange mesmerise 
crispy yellow leaves ...

maple morning crush
a carpet of ripened fruits
gold reflects in eyes ...








Written Oct 22nd, 2015
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Now entered for "Autumn haiku" contest by Laura loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Beautifully written, Upma! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:35 PM
I love the sound of maple morning crush!! reminds me of orange crush drink!! Long time , no see, Upma. How are you.
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:24 PM
these are very beautiful lines Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Dr. Upma "gold reflects in eyes"....loved that line :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
Muideen Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 2:24 AM
A lovely and an extreme interesting write my friend. It is very beautiful. Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Lovely. I especially enjoyed the maple morning crush line!
Guzzi Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Hi Upma I hope you are well I have been missing you!Light & Love
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Stunning, Dr. Upma!.. Too luck in the contest...
Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 10:53 AM
This is simply beautiful, Dr Upma. So So sweet....I loved every line. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Wonderful write, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, a 7 and good luck in the contest.
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Very nice Dr Sharma. Wonderful write. Of an Autumn day.
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