A Secret, Not Forgotten

hands clenched, behind a tide of atonement- barren skin drenched with tales told inside yesterday's moment desultory sacrifices sing soft as i weep beneath a willow for this time of burring is oft’ the reason salt seeps my pillow antiquated entrance to purgatory- nails bleeding on timber for me pulchritude of brilliance shines not when subsiding does occur- i crisscrossed all the crooked lines my poor soul must always make sure… rooms filled with depth too deep; blooms from roots, too rotten- for this secret, i shall keep until sorrow is forgotten February 11, 2020
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Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Poignant poem, Laura. Congrats on a most deserving top win.
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February 12, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Laura, What wonderful imagery spread throughout your poem - so many images in opposition and I do love the last line expressing deep healing. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 8:08 PM
love the last stanza, Laura, beautiful verse.
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February 11, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Hello LuLoo, some secrets are not forgotten. have a nice day my friend.
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