Parched Leaves of Season

parched leaves of season
   a blushing bloom seduces
      cherub in disguise


09.20.16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:05 PM
A delightful Autumn Haiku, Moon Flower! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
Flower Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, Kim. :)
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Missed your work Moon Flower, good to see you back in winning form...
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thank you, Charlie. :)
Krampe Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Congrats, Moon Flower. Lovely images.
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Thank you, Agnes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:26 PM
oh, this one is so cute, Moon Flower. Congrats on a wonderful win.
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:10 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Andrea. :) Yours is also a winner. Congrats as well. ;)
A   Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Moon Flower, I miss reading your work... A nice disguise... enjoyed. LINDA
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Hi Linda. It was over a month of being a mere lurker due to some important undertakings. I try to be (more) active once again and be able to join in with your series of contests. Thanks! ;)
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Moon flower:-) hugs Jan xx
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:34 AM
And congrats, too!
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Yeah, many thanks, Jan. hugs. ;)
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Moon Flower...loved this one. "Cherubs in disguise", my favorite line in all the entries :) congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:33 AM
Thank you so much, Luloo and congrats as well for your contest. ;)
Anish Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Fine short poem with an intriguing end line. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for that, Matthew.
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 5:08 PM
lovely imagery Moon flower:-) hugs jan xx
Flower Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Yours too is lovely. Didn't I say that? haha. ;)
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