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He came into my room carrying a gentle shade of light upon his face and as I grew accustomed to his presence, I felt his spirit free Its as if the angels carved him out of alabaster bone and marm with and anciency and rapture made of silver thread and gold Spellbound by his magic, I inhaled his presence dear, then watched my heart begin to beat for him and him alone He was the scent of orchid in a mingled denim shirt and as he blew me kisses, I hitched a breath so rare between his arms, beneath his skin, inside his heart I was here, there, everywhere, and as he roomed me with his auric fire I heard the beckon of my soul, " Go ahead release your heart, he's yours" January 14, 2020 The words I chose is Aura

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Date: 2/2/2020 1:43:00 PM
Oh...beautiful and romantic, Vienna! When true love is born...an auric fire fills your soul! ~ Warm regards /x/ paul
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Date: 1/30/2020 5:39:00 AM
So romantic and delicate! A wow!
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Date: 1/23/2020 10:06:00 AM
Way to go, a big hug and congrats!
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Date: 1/23/2020 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Richard, glad you enjoyed the poem, All the best,
Date: 1/23/2020 9:53:00 AM
Gorgeous romantic poetry, Pixie! Your words take me to an enchanted place...you have captured the aura so very well! Congrats to your well deserved win! :)
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Date: 1/23/2020 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Laura for dropping in. xo
Date: 1/23/2020 7:14:00 AM
sweet Pixie, words can't describe the emotion I felt reading this, and O, that LAST line! Beautifully expressed...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thank you dear Lu xo
Date: 1/23/2020 12:48:00 AM
Adore the imagery here - wonderful! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Pixie - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
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Date: 1/22/2020 7:35:00 PM
Ok back again to congratulate you once again!;)
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Date: 1/18/2020 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/18/2020 3:28:00 PM
I was not aware that it won, I don't see the contest on the contest winners list , truly I am honored . Thank you
Date: 1/17/2020 11:04:00 AM
This is sweetly seductive done with taste and class... Wow
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Date: 1/16/2020 8:33:00 PM
My entry seems so pale compared to this gem, Pixie..truly a beautiful poem..
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Date: 1/16/2020 6:58:00 AM
Such a beautiful write Vie, GL in the Contest
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Date: 1/15/2020 5:29:00 PM
Absolutely beautifu dear Pixiel!! Love this one!
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Date: 1/14/2020 8:29:00 PM
Gorgeous! Loved this, Pixie! The romance is palpable...a fave! :)
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