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He came into my room carrying a gentle shade of light upon his face and as I grew accustomed to his presence, I felt his spirit free Its as if the angels carved him out of alabaster bone and marm with and anciency and rapture made of silver thread and gold Spellbound by his magic, I inhaled his presence dear, then watched my heart begin to beat for him and him alone He was the scent of orchid in a mingled denim shirt and as he blew me kisses, I hitched a breath so rare between his arms, beneath his skin, inside his heart I was here, there, everywhere, and as he roomed me with his auric fire I heard the beckon of my soul, " Go ahead release your heart, he's yours" January 14, 2020 The words I chose is Aura
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Callus Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Oh...beautiful and romantic, Vienna! When true love is born...an auric fire fills your soul! ~ Warm regards /x/ paul
Krutsinger Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:39 AM
So romantic and delicate! A wow!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 10:06 AM
Way to go, a big hug and congrats!
Rose  Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Richard, glad you enjoyed the poem, All the best,
Leiser Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 9:53 AM
Gorgeous romantic poetry, Pixie! Your words take me to an enchanted place...you have captured the aura so very well! Congrats to your well deserved win! :)
Rose  Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Laura for dropping in. xo
Scars Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 7:14 AM
sweet Pixie, words can't describe the emotion I felt reading this, and O, that LAST line! Beautifully expressed...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
Rose  Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Thank you dear Lu xo
Barden Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:48 AM
Adore the imagery here - wonderful! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Pixie - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
Chiri Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:35 PM
Ok back again to congratulate you once again!;)
Chiri Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 3:28 PM
I was not aware that it won, I don't see the contest on the contest winners list , truly I am honored . Thank you
Wolves Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 11:04 AM
This is sweetly seductive done with taste and class... Wow
Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 8:33 PM
My entry seems so pale compared to this gem, Pixie..truly a beautiful poem..
May Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Such a beautiful write Vie, GL in the Contest
Lehman Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Absolutely beautifu dear Pixiel!! Love this one!
Leiser Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 8:29 PM
Gorgeous! Loved this, Pixie! The romance is palpable...a fave! :)
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