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Autumn Consumed

first haiku

glimmering moments
inner warmth distributed
as beauty displayed

second haiku

autumn flirtation
exhibits colorful joy
after summer break

09/19/2016

Copyright © Mark Paul Van Der Merwe | Year Posted 2016

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Kim Merryman Date: 9/22/2016 4:08:00 PM Lovely haiku, Mark! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings! Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/23/2016 2:05:00 AM Thank you so much Kim Regards, Mark

Charlie Smith Date: 9/21/2016 11:05:00 AM Well done Mark, congratulations... Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/23/2016 2:04:00 AM Thank you Charlie Regards, Mark

Agnes Krampe Date: 9/20/2016 7:57:00 PM Congrats, Mark. Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/21/2016 2:57:00 AM Thank you Agnes for taking the time to read Regards, Mark

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2016 6:26:00 PM Nice little set, Mark. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/21/2016 2:56:00 AM Thank you Andrea, much appreciated - i really am enjoying the different forms I am trying and appreciate the comments from true poets. Mark

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2016 4:20:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mark I see you wrote another lovely poem after the one I originally read:-) :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/21/2016 2:55:00 AM Thank you once again Jan - I do appreciate your comments and for you to read - yes I thought let me try my luck at another Haiku Mark

Beautiful Scars Date: 9/20/2016 4:05:00 PM Mark- beautiful imagery and loved the fact you wrote 2 haiku- well done! congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/21/2016 2:53:00 AM Thank you so much for my placement Luloo - I never even expected a placement considering my first attempt at writing this form - I am honored Regards, Mark

Morgen Farmer Date: 9/20/2016 2:58:00 AM Hi Mark, As expected your work is thoughtful. This poem is a perfect example of the imagist style. Well done. Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/20/2016 4:44:00 AM Thank you for reading Morgen - much appreciated. Regards, Mark

Jan Allison Date: 9/19/2016 7:50:00 AM Very beautiful imagery I got a warm glow reading your words Mark, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 9/19/2016 11:41:00 AM Thank you Jan - appreciated Mark