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Autumn Consumed

first haiku

glimmering moments
inner warmth distributed
as beauty displayed

second haiku

autumn flirtation
exhibits colorful joy
after summer break

09/19/2016

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Kim Merryman

September 22, 2016 at 4:08 PM

Lovely haiku, Mark! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 23, 2016 at 2:05 AM

Thank you so much Kim Regards, Mark

Charlie Smith

September 21, 2016 at 11:05 AM

Well done Mark, congratulations...

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 23, 2016 at 2:04 AM

Thank you Charlie Regards, Mark

Agnes Krampe

September 20, 2016 at 7:57 PM

Congrats, Mark.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 21, 2016 at 2:57 AM

Thank you Agnes for taking the time to read Regards, Mark

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2016 at 6:26 PM

Nice little set, Mark. Congrats on your win.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 21, 2016 at 2:56 AM

Thank you Andrea, much appreciated - i really am enjoying the different forms I am trying and appreciate the comments from true poets. Mark

Jan Allison

September 20, 2016 at 4:20 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Mark I see you wrote another lovely poem after the one I originally read:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 21, 2016 at 2:55 AM

Thank you once again Jan - I do appreciate your comments and for you to read - yes I thought let me try my luck at another Haiku Mark

Beautiful Scars

September 20, 2016 at 4:05 PM

Mark- beautiful imagery and loved the fact you wrote 2 haiku- well done! congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

September 21, 2016 at 2:53 AM

Thank you so much for my placement Luloo - I never even expected a placement considering my first attempt at writing this form - I am honored Regards, Mark