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Autumn Consumed

first haiku glimmering moments inner warmth distributed as beauty displayed second haiku autumn flirtation exhibits colorful joy after summer break 09/19/2016

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:08:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Mark! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 2:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim Regards, Mark

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/21/2016 11:05:00 AM

Well done Mark, congratulations...

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 2:04:00 AM

Thank you Charlie Regards, Mark

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2016 7:57:00 PM

Congrats, Mark.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/21/2016 2:57:00 AM

Thank you Agnes for taking the time to read Regards, Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:26:00 PM

Nice little set, Mark. Congrats on your win.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/21/2016 2:56:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, much appreciated - i really am enjoying the different forms I am trying and appreciate the comments from true poets. Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:20:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Mark I see you wrote another lovely poem after the one I originally read:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/21/2016 2:55:00 AM

Thank you once again Jan - I do appreciate your comments and for you to read - yes I thought let me try my luck at another Haiku Mark

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:05:00 PM

Mark- beautiful imagery and loved the fact you wrote 2 haiku- well done! congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/21/2016 2:53:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement Luloo - I never even expected a placement considering my first attempt at writing this form - I am honored Regards, Mark

Morgen Farmer

Date: 9/20/2016 2:58:00 AM

Hi Mark, As expected your work is thoughtful. This poem is a perfect example of the imagist style. Well done.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/20/2016 4:44:00 AM

Thank you for reading Morgen - much appreciated. Regards, Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2016 7:50:00 AM

Very beautiful imagery I got a warm glow reading your words Mark, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/19/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Jan - appreciated Mark