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Becoming Autumn

If I were to become Autumn
you would see me transform
all around  me in mid fall
leaves suspended 
a freeze frame of rustic life
my dress of quilted, rusty leaves
splattered in warm shades 
sunset painted in my hair, and
everywhere it seems 
  red-red-red

If I became Autumn 
would you love me in Spring
with all the pastel beauties
parading every where.
they are so temporary 
soft beauty fades and dies
remember I’ll be yours - Forever Autumn.

Still in progress......not sure about the second stanza.

Copyright © Suzanne Delaney | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 10/26/2020 7:36:00 AM

- It's beautiful ... from beginning to end, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2020 12:21:00 PM

If you became Autumn it would mean part of you would die and if you are not evergreen, you may not return.... Second stanza seems fine... Soft beauty does fade and die... You are right.
Date: 10/24/2020 5:18:00 PM

I love that second stanza. I love it all. It's so great to see you here, Suz!
Date: 10/24/2020 8:20:00 AM

I'd say yes because I love autumn, second stanza looks fine to me Suze. Hope your weekend going well. Tom

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