Crannies of Tears and Years of Fears

the wonder of you radiates the wonder of me;
for time shan’t stand still when all is lost in nooks
and recesses of where my mind used to wander-
now melodrama of the night has been ceased,
and all who walk the road to “all-knowing” shall 
be free from who they once were

instances of wrong doings and crannies of tears
swept under bridges to hide the revealing ripples-
like a petal falling off the nectar of my rose,
if only i could comprehend who i want to be...
roots too rotten and blades weeping, forgotten
(idiosyncrasies of torment fill each corner) 

no feeling can erase what needs feeling, 
no healing can chase what needs healing
abandoned by none…but me

i listen to the voice you speak of at night,
know the only thing you crave is my sin-
for my vanity bestows yet one more transgression;
as your lullaby is sung and my heart is hung-
i may be the one who knows not who God and man is…


20 lines total
2.17.20
Flower in the Crannied Wall Poetry Contest
Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Webster Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations Lu Loo!
Watt Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Inspired writing, Laura. Love the opening line especially "the wonder of you radiates the wonder of me". This is a deep swim. Congrats on your well-deserved win ~ John
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March 9, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your win with this pensive offering!
Turner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Laura, this is top shelf stuff! I especially liked the verse starting,"No feeling... Good luck!
Scars Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:44 AM
thank you Daniel and thank you for all your kindness here at PS. It never will be forgotten. Blessings
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