Jean Murray Poet Haiku

Autumn Arrives

Mist in the valley.
     Mountain rising magestic. 
       Morning in autumn.

    Chill in evening air.
      Meet me at the market square.
        Wrap up well my love.

    Stroll in fading light.
      Lane of colourful delight.
        Kicking up the leaves.

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Seosamh De Burca September 26, 2016 at 4:54 PM Again you paint a beautiful scene with your words and imagery. Love it. Jean Murray September 26, 2016 at 6:05 PM I can't tell you how much your praise means to me Seosamh. You know I love your work and it inspires me to do better.

Kim Merryman September 22, 2016 at 4:36 PM A sweet romantic scene! Congrats on your 2nd place win, Jean! Blessings! Jean Murray September 22, 2016 at 4:57 PM Thank you Kim.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2016 at 6:38 PM you tell a nice little autumn story with this, Jean. Congrats for your win. Jean Murray September 21, 2016 at 1:25 AM Thank you Andrea for stopping by on an autumn evening.

Jan Allison September 20, 2016 at 4:30 PM FABULOUS imagery Jean I adore the final one especially as i love kicking the leaves lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray September 20, 2016 at 5:24 PM Thank you Jan. Sometimes keeping to a strict syllable count makes them turn out better. One must squeese so much into so little.

Beautiful Scars September 20, 2016 at 4:12 PM Jean- the talk about majestic mountains was beautiful...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo Jean Murray September 20, 2016 at 4:26 PM I am honoured Laura. It was a peaceful piece to write. I also love autumn.

Connie Marcum Wong September 19, 2016 at 10:17 PM Your first and third were my favorite in this set Jean. Stunning! 7 ; ) Jean Murray September 20, 2016 at 2:54 AM A stunning from you is stunning to me Connie.

Daniel Turner September 19, 2016 at 8:59 PM Wow, Jean! This is great! So beautiful. Do I sense a lighter heart? I love your poem! Jean Murray September 20, 2016 at 2:53 AM Yes Daniel, my step is lighter these days. I only meant to write one verse then realised I had more to say.