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Autumn Arrives

Mist in the valley. Mountain rising magestic. Morning in autumn. Chill in evening air. Meet me at the market square. Wrap up well my love. Stroll in fading light. Lane of colourful delight. Kicking up the leaves.

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 9/26/2016 4:54:00 PM

Again you paint a beautiful scene with your words and imagery. Love it.

Jean Murray
Date: 9/26/2016 6:05:00 PM

I can't tell you how much your praise means to me Seosamh. You know I love your work and it inspires me to do better.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:36:00 PM

A sweet romantic scene! Congrats on your 2nd place win, Jean! Blessings!

Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:38:00 PM

you tell a nice little autumn story with this, Jean. Congrats for your win.

Jean Murray
Date: 9/21/2016 1:25:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for stopping by on an autumn evening.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:30:00 PM

FABULOUS imagery Jean I adore the final one especially as i love kicking the leaves lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2016 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Sometimes keeping to a strict syllable count makes them turn out better. One must squeese so much into so little.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:12:00 PM

Jean- the talk about majestic mountains was beautiful...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo

Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2016 4:26:00 PM

I am honoured Laura. It was a peaceful piece to write. I also love autumn.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/19/2016 10:17:00 PM

Your first and third were my favorite in this set Jean. Stunning! 7 ; )

Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2016 2:54:00 AM

A stunning from you is stunning to me Connie.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/19/2016 8:59:00 PM

Wow, Jean! This is great! So beautiful. Do I sense a lighter heart? I love your poem!

Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2016 2:53:00 AM

Yes Daniel, my step is lighter these days. I only meant to write one verse then realised I had more to say.