Autumn Haiku

Tonight the moonlight
Lays tipsy whisper in breeze
Our owls dance all night
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20/9/2016
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Merryman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:50 PM
A creative scene you have written with your haiku, Probir! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Gupta Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Thank you ...
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:26 PM
A lucid image. Nice.
Gupta Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Thank you ...
La France Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Probir, I like your haiku a lot, best of luck in the contest ~
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:02 AM
BW, Thank you ...
Nance Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Very nice :)
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Thanks ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Loved those dancing owls. This really grabbed the reader. Much congrats.
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:03 AM
I am glad you liked it ...
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:44 PM
this creates a lovely nature picture, Probir. Nicely done. Congrats.
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:04 AM
Thank you ...
A   Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Lovely autumn haiku. LINDA
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Thank you for dropping by after quite some time and thank you once again for liking and commenting ...
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Many congrats Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thank you, Jan ...
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Probir-lovely haiku, and I have always like owls :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Thank you for the chance to bring this haiku out of the autumn wind ... And then this chance placement too ... Thank you ...
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