Aching

I am like a cascading willow over a flowing river
and a victim of the wind-
and my heart is aching with bleeding tears
that float away . . . 
for I am embarking on an unknown journey
and must make this journey alone, my dears

I languish weeping afraid of the first step
weary-   although I have not even begun
my heart is full of suffering and anguish
I am afraid . . . 
oh, somewhere deep inside me is a strength
and I must put the aching aside and find it
but, I am cold Lord-

I thirst for my mother to hold me close to her
but she is long gone to her eternal rest
and I moan my grief . . . 

this journey will be all uphill, sigh
there will be storms and pits of agony
I will fall . . . . I know that I will
for cancer is a guest that comes unbidden
leaving a life weather-stained
and  r a v a g e d  . . . 

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January 14, 2020


Poetry/Free Verse/Aching
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1216-617-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Submitted to Your Best Free Verse 2020
sponsor, John Hamilton

Fourth Place
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Written for the contest, Free Verse Fever A
sponsor, Lu Loo, Theme chosen #4 Aching

First Place
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Mishra Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 1:51 PM
I love how you dive into the depths of heart Constance and pull out honest emotions yet look for a strand of faith. I am able to relate to your poems so easily because they remind me of certain phases of mine. May you always be abundant with strength and courage to keep moving forward. God bless you. Congratulations on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Very nice Constance congrats on a nice placement!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Constance. Nice narration of grief.
La France Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Subimal, thanks so much for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Swartz Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place finsh!
La France Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:07 AM
James, thanks for the congratulations _Constance
Lamoureux Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Way to go, a big hug and congrats!
La France Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Rick, thanks for the congrats and for the hug _Constance
Scars Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 7:09 AM
ahhhh, sweet Dear Heart, you tug at my heartstrings like no other! Lovely poem...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
La France Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Lu, thanks for the contest which always take me deep within myself and for my awesome placement which I am thrilled about _Constance
Barden Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:42 AM
Love this! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Constance - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
La France Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Greg, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and wishes, same back to you _Constance
Chiri Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Dear heart congrats on your top win!;)
La France Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Brenda, thanks so much for the congrats _Constance
Wakeling Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 6:10 PM
I survived cancer the secret is a positive mental attitude So gather positive people around you
La France Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:23 AM
David thanks for the visit and yhe advice, did you ever feel like just going within~
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