Taylor Musicaddict Poet Free verse

Attraction

My breath catches in my throat and my mouth falls open,

My eyes lock onto your dark blue irises,

Your eyes are sapphire gems and I want to hold them,

Time slows and my vision blurs,

My heart takes off like a wind up toy and I clutch at my chest,

A smile plays on your lips and creeps up to your eyes,

I feel my own mouth transform into a grin,

I feel like running up to you and leaping into your arms,

I feel like filling the space between us completely and indefinitely,

I feel like I've known you all my life, 

But we've just met,

And I say hello,

And you say hello,

And we part ways,

Dreaming about our next encounter.

Attraction

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 11, 2020 at 9:41 AM Hello Taylor Musicaddict, it sounds like you made a new friend. Nicely done. Welcome to the Soup. have a nice day my friend. Taylor Musicaddict June 5, 2020 at 11:02 AM Thanks. You too!

Richard Lamoureux January 23, 2020 at 10:08 AM Well done, congrats! Taylor Musicaddict January 23, 2020 at 10:57 AM Thank you Richard!

Beautiful Scars January 23, 2020 at 7:13 AM the imagery alone is amazing. Loved everything about this dear Taylor...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo Taylor Musicaddict January 23, 2020 at 10:34 AM Thank you Luloo! That means so much coming from such an amazing poet :)

Mahtab Bangalee January 23, 2020 at 1:16 AM wonderful poem; like this one Taylor Musicaddict January 23, 2020 at 10:41 AM Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :)

Gregory Richard Barden January 23, 2020 at 12:47 AM Beautiful write! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Taylor - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) Taylor Musicaddict January 23, 2020 at 10:38 AM Also, congratulations to you too! Taylor Musicaddict January 23, 2020 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much! Blessings to you as well :)

Brenda Chiri January 22, 2020 at 7:35 PM Congrats on your win!;) Taylor Musicaddict January 22, 2020 at 11:02 PM Thank you! You too :)