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Attraction

My breath catches in my throat and my mouth falls open, My eyes lock onto your dark blue irises, Your eyes are sapphire gems and I want to hold them, Time slows and my vision blurs, My heart takes off like a wind up toy and I clutch at my chest, A smile plays on your lips and creeps up to your eyes, I feel my own mouth transform into a grin, I feel like running up to you and leaping into your arms, I feel like filling the space between us completely and indefinitely, I feel like I've known you all my life, But we've just met, And I say hello, And you say hello, And we part ways, Dreaming about our next encounter. Attraction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/11/2020 9:41:00 AM
Hello Taylor Musicaddict, it sounds like you made a new friend. Nicely done. Welcome to the Soup. have a nice day my friend.
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 6/5/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thanks. You too!
Date: 1/23/2020 10:08:00 AM
Well done, congrats!
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 1/23/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 1/23/2020 7:13:00 AM
the imagery alone is amazing. Loved everything about this dear Taylor...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/23/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Luloo! That means so much coming from such an amazing poet :)
Date: 1/23/2020 1:16:00 AM
wonderful poem; like this one
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 1/23/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :)
Date: 1/23/2020 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful write! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Taylor - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o)
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 1/23/2020 10:38:00 AM
Also, congratulations to you too!
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 1/23/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! Blessings to you as well :)
Date: 1/22/2020 7:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Taylor Musicaddict
Date: 1/22/2020 11:02:00 PM
Thank you! You too :)

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