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Work In Progress

Finally tears of joy swim from these tired eyes
No longer am I drowning in murky waters
Nor trapped in a crowded school of goldfish 
Today I dive into fresh invigorating waters
Hoping to make a huge splash 
To pay forward a path for others
Never will I forget those who kept me a float
For they are my hero's and they always fed me hope

Copyright © Carol B. | Year Posted 2018


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  1. Date: 5/28/2018 10:43:00 AM

    Beautiful sentiments beautifully expressed and wrapped in a positive view as held by your totality for your life. Walk thru and walk on stronger! I hope you come back to Soup soon - your light is still on and warm. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
  1. Date: 4/4/2018 9:36:00 AM

    I think all of us are works in progress. Well expressed!
  1. Date: 3/25/2018 5:06:00 PM

    such a deep, moving artword, carol... armand and you come from the same stem... huggs
  1. Date: 3/25/2018 10:59:00 AM

    wonderfully penned poem ,loved it.have a great time!
  1. Date: 3/21/2018 3:10:00 PM

    I really like this, Carol. It's right to the point and an inspirational message. I see Armand has already been at this one, so I can just click on his name and go straight to his work now!
  1. Date: 3/8/2018 5:31:00 PM

    A Stunnung piece of work. Speaks to the poets integrity. You have that one of a kind spirit makes the people around you happy. A Fav.
  1. Date: 3/5/2018 5:27:00 AM

    Hope will keep us afloat... I feel the happiness...Nicely penned Carol...
  1. Date: 3/5/2018 1:48:00 AM

    - Spread your wings ... you can fly where you want, Carol :) - Lovely poem :) - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/4/2018 12:19:00 PM

    Im glad you are happy Carol... We are all works in progress..
  1. Date: 3/4/2018 10:15:00 AM

    Well written poem Carol, with an ending full of appreciation :)
  1. Date: 3/4/2018 8:37:00 AM

    "Bully for you", Carol. May you splash every day. I'm certain, we are all works in progress. I love that title! A positive and uplifting poem.