- When Dusk Ascends -

day releases dusk-
streaming stars settle in sonorous susurration;
the grey glazed moon bows his subtle head,
and all the somnolent constellations shine...shine for me


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original poem: 'comfortable silence' (1.20.20)

date: 1.28.20
Arbitrium Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
sponsor: Gregory Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 1/28/2020 11:45:00 PM
Wow, amazing poetry, you'll do well in the contest, with this gem..
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Date: 1/30/2020 8:58:00 AM
thank you dear Harry, you made me smile...x:-)
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Beautiful Scars
Date: 1/30/2020 8:58:00 AM
thank you dear Harry, you made me smile...x:-)
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