-the Fear of Me-

sated in intrigue i rest in silence, the hush of torment is as quiet as… -me- i navigate through the threshold to the only portal i belong in; the one dimension where i can weep without distraction, without eyes gazing with tangible predictability- for pain is palpable i can feel its fire blazing through my ashen bones ~ my manic eyes patronize ~ one crimson vein that never heeds- it bleeds remorse and comforts my needs; sowing seeds with spontaneous solitude, involuntary hands clench and release, they note a brooding revelation, wearing tidings of a demure sensation- (abandoned by my strange fixation) obsessed by who i always wanted to be, becoming who i hate- fearing fate- fearing ME
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Date: 2/11/2020 4:12:00 AM
Wow...so intense, Lu. Great write my dear friend. Congrats on your win! ~Charlie
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Date: 2/11/2020 2:00:00 PM
dear Charlie, thank you always... x:-)
Date: 2/11/2020 1:49:00 AM
De Lu, I love this one. Congrats.
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:59:00 PM
I am so shocked and honored, thank you so much x:-)
Date: 2/1/2020 4:30:00 PM
Yet again, you take us through the window of your blessed soul, Luloo:-) Congrats on your top win! You're on a roll!
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:59:00 PM
thank you dear Edward....blessings. x:-)
Date: 2/1/2020 3:16:00 PM
Great Luloo! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:41:00 PM
Laura your poetry is amazing!;) congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:13:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady! X:-)
Date: 1/31/2020 12:29:00 PM
Another stunning write Laura, I loved everything about this write! Congrats on another top win!
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:12:00 PM
Wow thank you so much, I am honored you liked it! Blessings from Michigan...x:-)
Date: 1/24/2020 8:36:00 AM
What a deep look you've taken inside the psyche, Laura. Great use of John's words. Well wishes for his contest.
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Date: 1/26/2020 1:47:00 PM
thank you so much lovely Lin x:-)
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