Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

-the Fear of Me-

sated in intrigue i rest in silence,

the hush of torment is as quiet as…

-me-

i navigate through the threshold to the only portal i belong in;

the one dimension where i can weep without distraction,

without eyes gazing with tangible predictability-

for pain is palpable

i can feel its fire blazing through my ashen bones

~ my manic eyes patronize ~

one crimson vein that never heeds-

it bleeds remorse and comforts my needs;

sowing seeds with spontaneous solitude,

involuntary hands clench and release,

they note a brooding revelation,

wearing tidings of a demure sensation-

(abandoned by my strange fixation)

obsessed by who i always wanted to be,
becoming who i hate-
fearing fate-
fearing 
ME


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1.24.20

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Charles Messina February 11, 2020 at 4:12 AM Wow...so intense, Lu. Great write my dear friend. Congrats on your win! ~Charlie Beautiful Scars February 11, 2020 at 2:00 PM dear Charlie, thank you always... x:-)

Rob Carmack February 11, 2020 at 1:49 AM De Lu, I love this one. Congrats. Beautiful Scars February 11, 2020 at 1:59 PM I am so shocked and honored, thank you so much x:-)

Edward Ibeh February 1, 2020 at 4:30 PM Yet again, you take us through the window of your blessed soul, Luloo:-) Congrats on your top win! You're on a roll! Beautiful Scars February 11, 2020 at 1:59 PM thank you dear Edward....blessings. x:-)

Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2020 at 3:16 PM Great Luloo! Congrats on top win!

Brenda Chiri January 31, 2020 at 12:41 PM Laura your poetry is amazing!;) congrats on your top win!;) Beautiful Scars January 31, 2020 at 1:13 PM Thank you sweet lady! X:-)

John Hamilton January 31, 2020 at 12:29 PM Another stunning write Laura, I loved everything about this write! Congrats on another top win! Beautiful Scars January 31, 2020 at 1:12 PM Wow thank you so much, I am honored you liked it! Blessings from Michigan...x:-)

Lin Lane January 24, 2020 at 8:36 AM What a deep look you've taken inside the psyche, Laura. Great use of John's words. Well wishes for his contest. Beautiful Scars January 26, 2020 at 1:47 PM thank you so much lovely Lin x:-)