If There Was No Poetry

I could not make sense
of the wonder
would stand 
bewildered and mute

I could not open
and let out
the feelings that well
from my depth

I could not speak truth
and would choke 
on the unsaid words
in my throat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 8:08 PM
Powerful penning, Agnes.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Back for more, and more congrats, hugs!
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Agnes. Well penned.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Wonderfully done. Congrats on POTD!
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Lovely, Agnes. Belated congrats on POTD. Charlie
Callus Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:20 AM
You have expressed your feelings very well, Agnes. Where would we be without poetry!! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:44 PM
splendid, and congrats both in the contest and on a potd I see you got as well.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Poetry helps us all to express our feelings whether we are the writer or the reader. A belated congratulations on your wonderful POTD honor Agnes. xxoo
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:22 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem in S.O. contest, Agnes :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:41 PM
- Agnes, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... and good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Agustin Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 4:20 AM
A excellent message and a great description of the torment a person goes through if he/she were responsible for the deaths of people due to their driving negligence. An excellent read my friend Tom, Congratulations on your wonderful honor of POTD. Blessings Jennifer.
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Jennifer, you wrote this comment for Tom on 1/25, but it shows up as comment on my poem from the day before. Perhaps copy it over so he can see it? It's probably a glitch in Soup
Mishra Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:50 AM
So precisely expressive poetry..."I couldn't speak truth and choke".... Wonderful, congrats on POTD
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Thank you, Ashok
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:39 AM
Nice to see you back Agnes, congratulations on P. O. T. D. Tom
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Thank you, Tom, same to you
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations on POTD
Ibeh Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Congrats on well-deserved p.o.t.d. recognition, Agnes!:-)
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on POTD Agnes!
Nicole Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:34 AM
"I could not speak truth and would choke on the unsaid words in my throat" A powerful way to express how it would feel- "if there was no poetry" Oh my!! Not being able to share emotions from the heart through words, that would be terrible indeed. I am so thankful that we can. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Agnes, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Thank you so much, Brandy.
May Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Congrats on POTD Agnes..
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Wanter Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Another way to say it "If Agnes could not write poetry."
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:37 AM
aww, you're too kind, thanks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Back with congratulations Agnes! (Yay!) Have a fabulous day. xomo
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Wolves Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on POTD... well done!!
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thanks so much!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Congrats on POTD!
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Dropping back to say congratulations on your POTD:-) So lovely to see your name on the list:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Jan. I missed being here.
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