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Read Poems by Paul Callus

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Rain Falls Unbroken 

Dressed in mourning robes 
lonely and heartbroken
she sits in semi-darkness
by the glowing embers
rocking herself to the
rhythmic unbroken sound
of torrential rain...
a therapeutic balm
gently easing the pain 
healing her heart’s misery.

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© 21st September 2017

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Gupta Avatar
    Probir Gupta
    Date: 9/21/2017 11:13:00 PM
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    Deep impression of rainfall sounds on the wounds ... Touches of infinity in your brevity ...
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    Darlene De Beaulieu
    Date: 9/21/2017 7:45:00 PM
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    Let the rain be her tears. In time she will heal. Have a nice evening my friend.
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    JAN ALLISON
    Date: 9/21/2017 6:39:00 PM
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    Very sensitively penned, I can picture this scene so vividly in my minds eye Paul. I think this will do well for yo in the contest it is so moving:-) hugs jan xx
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    Lynn Marie
    Date: 9/21/2017 5:36:00 PM
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    Haunting imagery, beautifully conveyed. Living in a rain forest, I appreciate and relate to the rain's hypnotic trance and glimmer of hope within the gloom. Superb writing Paul, a joy to read you:) a fave
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    Heidi Sands
    Date: 9/21/2017 5:05:00 PM
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    I can feel these words deeply. Well written! Good luck in the contest Paul.

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