Free Verse Fever

Love is like a million stars in an ocean of celestial beings Shining brighter than all others I am the moon whose evening pull reaches out to you beckoning to you in a seductive frequency no other can hear as it was meant for only you Your brilliance begs me to pull you into me, cradling you It's with that aching aura that leaves me astounded The attraction is beyond any reasoning..... As if it's the perfect aria that every opera craves and dreams of being more beautiful than any other performed That is the love we two share....
1/12/2020 Word used: astounded (Yet also used all the other words)

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Date: 7/26/2020 9:15:00 PM
Another excellent write. So good, like your other poems, that I forget you are writing in free verse. Not too many people can accomplish that. Take care, Bryan
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:18:00 PM
Wow thank you Bryan I really appreciate your kind words!:)
Date: 2/11/2020 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Brenda. Well done.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 9:00:00 PM
Thank you line!;)
Date: 2/2/2020 1:39:00 PM
Love it Brenda. So romantic!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 9:00:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 2/1/2020 1:50:00 AM
Congrats Brenda, well deserved.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2020 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Art so very much! And thank you!;)
Date: 1/30/2020 5:35:00 AM
This is astoundingly gorgeous Brenda. Congratulations on POTD!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 6:27:00 AM
My county friend thank you I appreciate your visits!;)
Date: 1/25/2020 4:32:00 AM
Meant for only you... Wow.... The lucky one However very romantic poetry as always... You always bring things beautiful and powerful... Belated Congrats on your POTD win Regards, Ashok
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:32:00 PM
Thank you 'll that is so swest;)
Date: 1/24/2020 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Brenda on your great win with a lovely poem defining love.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much!;)
Date: 1/23/2020 10:04:00 AM
Way to go, a big hug and congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Rick!;) hugs!
Date: 1/23/2020 7:08:00 AM
and you say WHAT?? lol Of course you are one of the best, it shows. Beautifully expressed as always sweet Brenda...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:30:00 PM
Lol Laura thank you my dear friend!;) you boost my ego;)
Date: 1/23/2020 12:41:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Brenda - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
Gregory thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/22/2020 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Brenda! Congrats on your win! :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
Laura,thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/22/2020 7:55:00 PM
Your love aria is incomparable to any , dear Brenda, congratulations on your wonderful win, and thank you for your presence, have a great evening.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/22/2020 8:51:00 PM
Thank you pixie! You are so kind!;)
Date: 1/22/2020 5:17:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Bren, way to go! Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/22/2020 7:47:00 PM
Lol thank you so much John!;)
Date: 1/22/2020 6:04:00 AM
what a poem, a fav
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/22/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you muppet!;)
Date: 1/21/2020 9:11:00 PM
Another beautiful write Brenda, belated congrats on POTD, don't know how I missed this one!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/21/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thank you so much John! Much appreciated );
Date: 1/20/2020 12:53:00 PM
How could I have missed this POTD? -- I think that when I saw 'fever' in the title I figured it was way too hot for me to handle. Congrats, Brenda! Smiles, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:55:00 PM
Gershon thank you my friend! I appreciate your visit and thanks for the smile!;)
Date: 1/19/2020 10:51:00 AM
Whats all this then? Hhmmm...POTD? Very well done you! Yet another deserving accolade, Brenda - and my congratulations! Fondest thoughts. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:55:00 PM
Lol John thank you my dear so much;) hugs!;)
Date: 1/19/2020 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda on your POTD, don't know how I missed this gem. it is absolutely breathtaking and an absolute fav. for me, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:54:00 PM
Wow thank you for the fav and I enjoy your visits!;)
Date: 1/16/2020 7:27:00 AM
"fever" Congratulations Brenda on POTD
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:54:00 PM
Arturo thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/15/2020 6:08:00 AM
Beautifully penned, love, "As if it's the perfect aria that every opera craves and dreams of being more beautiful than any other performed"; great comparison. Congratulations!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:53:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it!thank you your visit is greatly appreciated!;)
Date: 1/15/2020 5:09:00 AM
Glad to see this one as POTD congratulations... now more people can see this one ... hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thanks Sandy so much appreciated!;)
Date: 1/14/2020 11:46:00 PM
Brenda, very happy to see this beautifully penned tribute to love make the POTD. I love "the perfect aria that every opera craves"! I love it! Congrats ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:52:00 PM
John thank you!;)
Date: 1/14/2020 8:41:00 PM
Another potd for you! Congrats Brenda on this gem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2020 11:08:00 PM
Lol glad you made it to congratulate me James! Thank you I appreciate it!;)
Date: 1/14/2020 6:43:00 PM
So beautiful and so deserving of POTD. Congratulations, Brenda. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2020 11:08:00 PM
Warren thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/14/2020 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on P.O.T.D
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2020 11:08:00 PM
Jamad thank you!;)
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