Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Free Verse Fever

Love is like a million stars 
in an ocean of celestial beings
Shining brighter than all others 
I am the moon whose evening pull 
reaches out to you beckoning to 
you in a seductive frequency no 
other can hear as it was 
meant for only you
Your brilliance begs me to pull you 
into me, cradling you 
It's with that aching aura that 
leaves me astounded
The attraction is beyond any 
reasoning.....
As if it's the perfect aria 
that every opera craves and dreams 
of being more beautiful 
than any other performed
That is the love we two share....


1/12/2020
Word used: astounded
(Yet also used all the other words)

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Bryan Norton July 26, 2020 at 9:15 PM Another excellent write. So good, like your other poems, that I forget you are writing in free verse. Not too many people can accomplish that. Take care, Bryan Brenda Chiri July 26, 2020 at 9:18 PM Wow thank you Bryan I really appreciate your kind words!:)

Line Gauthier February 11, 2020 at 3:36 PM Congrats on your POTD, Brenda. Well done. Brenda Chiri February 11, 2020 at 9:00 PM Thank you line!;)

Krish Radhakrishna February 2, 2020 at 1:39 PM Love it Brenda. So romantic! Brenda Chiri February 11, 2020 at 9:00 PM Thank you so much!;)

Arthur Vaso February 1, 2020 at 1:50 AM Congrats Brenda, well deserved. Brenda Chiri February 1, 2020 at 1:34 PM Thank you Art so very much! And thank you!;)

Caren Krutsinger January 30, 2020 at 5:35 AM This is astoundingly gorgeous Brenda. Congratulations on POTD! Brenda Chiri January 30, 2020 at 6:27 AM My county friend thank you I appreciate your visits!;)

Ashok Kumar Mishra January 25, 2020 at 4:32 AM Meant for only you... Wow.... The lucky one However very romantic poetry as always... You always bring things beautiful and powerful... Belated Congrats on your POTD win Regards, Ashok Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:32 PM Thank you 'll that is so swest;)

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 24, 2020 at 12:24 AM Congratulations, Brenda on your great win with a lovely poem defining love. Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:31 PM Thank you so very much!;)

Richard Lamoureux January 23, 2020 at 10:04 AM Way to go, a big hug and congrats! Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:30 PM Thanks Rick!;) hugs!

Beautiful Scars January 23, 2020 at 7:08 AM and you say WHAT?? lol Of course you are one of the best, it shows. Beautifully expressed as always sweet Brenda...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:30 PM Lol Laura thank you my dear friend!;) you boost my ego;)

Gregory Richard Barden January 23, 2020 at 12:41 AM Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Brenda - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3 Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:29 PM Gregory thank you so much!;)

Laura Leiser January 22, 2020 at 9:13 PM Beautiful verse, Brenda! Congrats on your win! :) Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:29 PM Laura,thank you so much!;)

Mystic Rose Rose January 22, 2020 at 7:55 PM Your love aria is incomparable to any , dear Brenda, congratulations on your wonderful win, and thank you for your presence, have a great evening. Brenda Chiri January 22, 2020 at 8:51 PM Thank you pixie! You are so kind!;)

John Gondolf January 22, 2020 at 5:17 PM Back with congrats on your win, Bren, way to go! Hugs, John Brenda Chiri January 22, 2020 at 7:47 PM Lol thank you so much John!;)

Nick Trim January 22, 2020 at 6:04 AM what a poem, a fav Brenda Chiri January 22, 2020 at 7:47 PM Thank you muppet!;)

John Hamilton January 21, 2020 at 9:11 PM Another beautiful write Brenda, belated congrats on POTD, don't know how I missed this one! Brenda Chiri January 21, 2020 at 10:36 PM Thank you so much John! Much appreciated );

Gershon Wolf January 20, 2020 at 12:53 PM How could I have missed this POTD? -- I think that when I saw 'fever' in the title I figured it was way too hot for me to handle. Congrats, Brenda! Smiles, Gershon Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:55 PM Gershon thank you my friend! I appreciate your visit and thanks for the smile!;)

John Fleming January 19, 2020 at 10:51 AM Whats all this then? Hhmmm...POTD? Very well done you! Yet another deserving accolade, Brenda - and my congratulations! Fondest thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:55 PM Lol John thank you my dear so much;) hugs!;)

Jennifer Proxenos January 19, 2020 at 12:19 AM Congratulations Brenda on your POTD, don't know how I missed this gem. it is absolutely breathtaking and an absolute fav. for me, Blessings, Jennifer. Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:54 PM Wow thank you for the fav and I enjoy your visits!;)

Arturo Michael January 16, 2020 at 7:27 AM "fever" Congratulations Brenda on POTD Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:54 PM Arturo thank you so much!;)

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 6:08 AM Beautifully penned, love, "As if it's the perfect aria that every opera craves and dreams of being more beautiful than any other performed"; great comparison. Congratulations! Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:53 PM I am so glad you liked it!thank you your visit is greatly appreciated!;)

Sandra Adams January 15, 2020 at 5:09 AM Glad to see this one as POTD congratulations... now more people can see this one ... hugs Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:53 PM Thanks Sandy so much appreciated!;)

John Watt January 14, 2020 at 11:46 PM Brenda, very happy to see this beautifully penned tribute to love make the POTD. I love "the perfect aria that every opera craves"! I love it! Congrats ~ John Brenda Chiri January 20, 2020 at 9:52 PM John thank you!;)

James Swartz January 14, 2020 at 8:41 PM Another potd for you! Congrats Brenda on this gem. Brenda Chiri January 14, 2020 at 11:08 PM Lol glad you made it to congratulate me James! Thank you I appreciate it!;)

Warren Doll January 14, 2020 at 6:43 PM So beautiful and so deserving of POTD. Congratulations, Brenda. Warmest Wishes~ Warren Brenda Chiri January 14, 2020 at 11:08 PM Warren thank you so much!;)

Jamad Harris January 14, 2020 at 3:53 PM Congrats on P.O.T.D Brenda Chiri January 14, 2020 at 11:08 PM Jamad thank you!;)

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