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Life's Mysteries

Long before the wonder of you began
I sat with hands held tight for none but love
Far away past the crescent moon, I ran
Each moment led me to what I dream of
Simple yet divine is your affection

My wish is for us to live forever
You and I share the strongest connection
Scintilla nights with you….my endeavor
The joy of my dear life is but one thing
Each memory lived with you as your wife
Resounding angels gaze at us and sing
Ineffable moments became my life
Embracing your love I shall never cease
Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries

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Life's Mysteries Contest
12.20.20
John Hamilton

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Mark Koplin Date: 1/2/2021 5:12:00 AM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/1/2021 12:00:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Love your last line, "Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries." So true. Enjoy your win. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings.................... Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 12/31/2020 2:11:00 PM Although i don't know you, I feel like I have seen into the window of your heart in this poem. Such lovely writing. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 12/31/2020 10:24:00 AM So nice to see something new from you, I had a feeling this was you but wasn't sure as you have not been posting lately! I was pleasantly surprised to see this was you in your inimitable style. Congrats Laura on another top win, nice to have you back! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/20/2020 7:17:00 PM Wonderful poem filled with love and joy, Laura, all the best:) Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 12/20/2020 2:12:00 PM Laura, so nice to see you posting poems again, missed my sister in poetry so much and this acrostic is truly beautiful and filled with the love for your one true love, well done _Constance Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/20/2020 3:45:00 AM Ah, your acrostic is tender and romantic, well placed in every way, Thank you for sharing dear Lu, have a blessed day and a wonderful Christmas xo Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM thank you sweet Rosie, nice to see you :) -luloo

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/20/2020 3:01:00 AM I love this, sweet lady. I'm overjoyed to see your posting again!!! I've missed you desperately. I love you. God bless you with a win :) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM awww thank you so much dear Regina, I missed you too! Thank you and be blessed :) -luloo

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 12/20/2020 2:58:00 AM Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries- it's beautiful that love and sweetheart is always a mystery of life Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM thank you very much :) -luloo