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autumn leaves ignite trees ablaze with burnished gold log fires burn brightly Autumn Haiku - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 09~19~16

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Date: 9/22/2016 4:00:00 PM
A beautiful descriptive haiku, Jan! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/22/2016 4:04:00 PM
Many thanks Kim I really enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 5:45:00 AM
I love it, Jan - Fall is my favorite season!!!
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:12:00 PM
Mine to Regina and its so lovely to see you back:-) :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 12:05:00 AM
Well done Jan, just dropping by again to congratulate you - A well deserved placement - Beautiful Regards, Mark
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Date: 9/22/2016 2:30:00 AM
Many thanks Mark I'm delighted LuLoo liked it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 12:59:00 PM
Dropping back as well, Jan, to cheer. Yay! ;)
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:04:00 PM
Many thanks Moon Flower:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 11:00:00 AM
Warm and cozy win Jan, congratulations...
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Date: 9/21/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Charlie - I am still singing the lovely lyrics you wrote:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 6:49:00 AM
Congrats for your first place win dear Jan for this fabulous haiku! your words create a picture of carnival of autumn, very delightful...loved it!..love, ANU:)
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Date: 9/21/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Anu:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 2:28:00 AM
I love the correlation between trees ablaze and log fires Jan. Brilliant! Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie I am delighted with the comments I've received:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 12:17:00 AM
Well done, Jan, you're an Autmny person, indeedy. Viv x
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:41:00 AM
I love this time of year Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 9:08:00 PM
A 7 for this great WINNING haiku, Jan! Janice
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:40:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 7:55:00 PM
Back with congrats :) Agnes
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:40:00 AM
Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 6:39:00 PM
Lovely images of fall. Congratulations and thanks for the votes of confidence long before the judging.
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:41:00 PM
The contest closed so quickly Janis I saw some lovely descriptive poems:-) I love reading and writing about autumn its my fave time of year :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 6:24:00 PM
You know what. Seeing it again, I REALLY like it a LOT, sweetie. The last line is pretty good too for what haiku should do! Congrats.
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:25:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea and also for the critque on the one I didn't post will save it for another time or post it later:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 5:57:00 PM
congrats Jan loved it.....Seren
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 5:53:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your First Place win, Jan. I knew it would be at the top! Congrats. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Sandra I was delighted to place so well i do like the traditional 5 7 5 form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 5:46:00 PM
beautiful Jan...congrats
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:55:00 PM
Many thanks David:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 3:59:00 PM
sweet Jan...loved this the second I read it :) I love the word "ablaze" and loved your imagery. Lovely poem for a lovely lady :) congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/20/2016 4:13:00 PM
Oh Wow thanks so much LuLoo I am absolutely delighted you liked my poem. I love the traditional 5 7 5 form of haiku - I did write another one to accompany this one but didn't have time to add it to this one before the contest closed :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 10:59:00 AM
What a lovely picture, Jan!! You'll make a very good painter:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:58:00 AM
I only paint with words Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 8:58:00 PM
Fine 5 7 5 poem here. You capture the scene in just a few words. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/20/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thanks Matthew I love the traditional 5 7 5 form of the haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 5:53:00 PM
I'd say a well-thought-out one, Jan. GL for the contest. ;) Hugs!
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Moon Flower:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 5:14:00 PM
Jan, this is LOVELY, and I can feel the flames, a winner for sure ~
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Constance - I tried to work on the imagery in the picture LuLoo posted to inspire us :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 3:35:00 PM
Very lovely autumn imagery in your Haiku both outdoors and in, Jan. Love the contrasting settings and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/19/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 11:34:00 AM
autumn glows through your 'ku, dear jan... lovely!.. still drowsy from time lag..huggs
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Date: 9/19/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Nette I was inspired by the image LuLoo posted:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 11:12:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Jan. Good luck on the contest. Agnes
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Date: 9/19/2016 11:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Agnes I love this time of year:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 9:53:00 AM
Fantastic write Jan - beautiful picture of Autumn portrayed in words Mark
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Date: 9/19/2016 10:00:00 AM
Many thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 9:36:00 AM
Lovely, Jan! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/19/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Kim I have read some lovely poems I think the contest will fill very quickly:-) hugs jan xx
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