Fiery Arbour

A serene, suave breeze
Fails to put out the gold fire
Of dewy, cool trees.

20th September, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:33 PM
You are very skillful with your Haikus. Your style of writing is defined by your Profound Haikus. My best regards, Sarban.
Bhattacharya Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Thank you very much , Afzal.
Merryman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:16 PM
A lovely haiku, Sarban! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Kim.
May Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Congrats on your win Sarban
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Krampe Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Congrats, Sarban.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Thank you, Agnes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Nice description, Sarban. Love the title!
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea !
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September 20, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Lovely and cozy haiku. LINDA
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thank you..
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sarban:-) hugs Jan xx
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Thank you, Jan. I always appreciate your frequent visits.
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Sarban, lovely haiku :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Thank you very much, Laura ! I'm also glad to be a part of your contest. :)
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Thank you very much, Laura ! I'm also glad to be a part of your contest. :)
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 3:05 PM
lovely imagery Sarban:-) hugs Jan xx
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Thank you..
Nayak Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 2:37 PM
beautiful haiku, very nice!
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Thank you..
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September 21, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Thank you..
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