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- Plumb the Depths -

'plumb the depths' ______________________ I. (slow melody begins in G minor) i cannot fathom the sound soul you seem to wear when i’m near, perpendicular passion without fear- for the depths are not deep enough to measure our love, my dear- we share a rare connection, of honor and affection- a vow no other lover can speak of... sent from above ______ CHORUS you made an exact mark on my heart, and it bleeds love for NONE but you- you saw in me things i never thought you knew- always and forever have been drawn, your soft heart i stumbled upon- autumn vows of thens and nows; no ruler needed… with a love deep seeded ______ II. (switches to faster melody) we are created from divine inspiration, loving me with all your adoration- weigh me in your arms, for i am ethereal and light- sought only by your sight, delicate like lullaby scents, no, love never makes sense, gentle like spring combing rose petals- like a feather i brush up against your soft tan skin... and ignite the fire of passion within ______ CHORUS you made an exact mark on my heart, and it bleeds love for none but you- you saw in me things i never thought you knew- always and forever have been drawn, your soft heart i stumbled upon- autumn vows of thens and nows; no ruler needed… with a love deep seeded ______ (melody plays for 25 seconds) ______ (switches back to slower melody) a flawless direct line to my life has been drawn, i drift o’er eastern skies of our silhouettes - for you are my medallion dawn, a sunrise no one forgets… no, the depths are not deep enough to measure our love, we share a rare connection, of honor and affection- a promise with faith no other can speak of… yes, a promise of faith, no other love, can speak of - - - you made an exact mark on my heart… and... it bleeds for NONE but you (ends in F minor) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Date - 1.19.20 'PLUMB THE DEPTHS' Sponsor - Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/12/2020 1:09:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Lo Luu :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2020 4:50:00 PM
Back with congratulations sweet lady. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/19/2020 5:58:00 PM
Have you put this one to music? It’s really really good! Hugs Rick.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/21/2020 7:25:00 AM
yes I did! It turned out ok I guess. I am still learning how to write lyric poems. I play piano and know the notes and chords. That helped. thank you dear Richard! x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/19/2020 2:46:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Laura , good luck in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/21/2020 7:24:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve! x:-)-luloo

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