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Autumn

Leaves once gleaming green Lay brown and rotting in dust Circle of life whirls Written on:09/19/206 Contest: Autumn Haiku

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Date: 9/22/2016 4:48:00 PM
Good one, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/20/2016 8:38:00 PM
Nicely done Sara, congrats on your win.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 9/20/2016 6:44:00 PM
Awesome last line, SAra. Congrats for the win.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea,appreciate your visit!
Date: 9/20/2016 4:36:00 PM
The circle of life is complete - love this one Sara many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Jan,I loved yours too!
Date: 9/20/2016 4:19:00 PM
Sweet Sara, very true about the circle of life..as soon as summer ends, comes all the beautiful hues but after that not so pretty colors arrive...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/21/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Laura,appreciate the placement!