Autumn

Leaves once gleaming green 
Lay brown and rotting in dust
Circle of life whirls

Written on:09/19/206
Contest: Autumn Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Good one, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Nicely done Sara, congrats on your win.
Chansarkar Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Richard!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Awesome last line, SAra. Congrats for the win.
Chansarkar Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea,appreciate your visit!
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:36 PM
The circle of life is complete - love this one Sara many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Jan,I loved yours too!
Scars Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Sweet Sara, very true about the circle of life..as soon as summer ends, comes all the beautiful hues but after that not so pretty colors arrive...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Laura,appreciate the placement!
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