Sandra Adams Poet Lay

Angel of Comfort

this breathless wind befalls tonight
a whispered voice upon my ear
an angel stands within the light
its wing it spans to catch my tear

my soul it speaks so it can hear
a tale of pain in mind alight
it offers comfort when it's near
then slowly spreads its wings in flight

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Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2021 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I Love This One. I also love angels. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Christuraj Alex August 26, 2021 at 10:53 PM breathless wind - Beautiful expression. The poem is very beautiful as well. Congratulations on your win!

Chris Green February 17, 2020 at 10:26 AM You know I loved this one. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Perhaps an angel was watching over you. Sandra Adams February 18, 2020 at 9:15 AM Thank you Chris...I think the angels are always close by... hugs

John Watt February 16, 2020 at 6:46 PM a sad and savory write, with meter and rhyme perfectly rendered. Love the opening and closing lines most. Congrats to you Sandra on another winner ~ John Sandra Adams February 16, 2020 at 10:03 PM Thank you so much John...i guess i am getting better at this rhyme thing though i do still prefer my free verse... hugs

Gershon Wolf February 16, 2020 at 4:44 PM As predicted, you're near the top (though maybe a bit lower than I expected). Just a lovely poem with perfect flow and rhythm. Smiles, Gershon Sandra Adams February 16, 2020 at 5:09 PM thank you so much Gershon...haven't had much time to check out the lists yet... seems a bunch came in at once... hugs

Charles Messina February 16, 2020 at 1:08 PM Very nice, Sandy. This flows so well. Congrats on your win! Hugs Charlie PS: I'm not too far from you, I live in NJ hope this gentle winter holds up :) Sandra Adams February 16, 2020 at 4:37 PM Thank you so much Charlie for hosting the contest and the win...I am hoping this mild winter continues too... we had 3 days in the teens this winter...one per month I think they said... good with me :) hugs

Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 10:58 PM Just beautifully penned, my friend. Reserve your place at or near the top of the winner's list in 'Char-lay's' contest! Sandra Adams January 28, 2020 at 8:25 AM thank you so much for your Vote of confidence Gershon :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger January 27, 2020 at 11:26 AM This one is exquisitely done, Sandra. Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 12:12 PM thank you so much Caren :)

Running Wolves January 27, 2020 at 9:40 AM gotta love them angels.... beautiful lay Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:04 AM thank you so much Robert... hugs

Beautiful Scars January 27, 2020 at 8:52 AM awww, beautifully expressed sweet Sandy. reads like a winner, and a fave x:-) Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:04 AM wow Thank you my beautiful friend...i am honored by your kind words and the fave of this one... hugs :)

Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 6:59 AM Soft and comforting your words are this morning. Everyone needs an angel in their life, your poem brings that feeling today. This is a winner for sure. Loved this Sandy. Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:03 AM Thank you so much Chris... not sure about a winner but glad to see it has your vote... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit January 27, 2020 at 6:59 AM Flows like a song my friend--a comforting read, in rhythmic voice--a sure TOP win in my mind. Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:03 AM wow... thanks for your kind words and vote of confidence Vijay :) hugs

Arturo Michael January 27, 2020 at 2:14 AM Soothing too...Nice write Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:00 AM Thank you Arturo :) hugs

Hello There January 27, 2020 at 12:11 AM Nice to feel not so alone with a caring and devoted angel of comfort :) hugs Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:00 AM Thank you HT... we all need angels in life... hugs

Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2020 at 11:38 PM So beautiful! Sounds like a winner! Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:00 AM Thank you Kim, what a kind thing to say... hugs

Juliet Ligon January 26, 2020 at 10:04 PM Lovely lay. Your rhyming forms turn out really nice. Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 9:59 AM thank you Juliet....it takes me time to write in rhyme :) hugs