Crimson Fire

my demons remembered the
way you fought so hard to forgive-
your crimson fire sought a life
too barren to live

absolute nothingness, 
internal resentment for all who
know my secret-
captured inside an hourglass 
with grains trying to keep it

breaking bread without wine
bestows unholy faith - ashes to dust-
allowing pain and love to align
gives way to feed off distrust

for i am but a leach;
a one-sided serpent, all knowing,
yet knows nothing at all-
mother nature attempted to reach
the naked reverie flowing,
adrift the power of my waterfall

fearing not what lies ahead,
tormented at the loss of you-
i entered your threshold instead
and expressed what i always do

my arthritic fingers, frail-
too full of ache to quill this pain;
all the wonder of the fear i impale
is all this soul can contain
and
all i can remember is this desire...
i craved you in autumn's medallion delight-
you ignited my crimson fire-
                  under the harvest moonlight

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February 11, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/14/2020 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Lu Loo. Masterful.
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Date: 2/12/2020 11:32:00 PM
Lu Loo, you are so masterful at this style. Your word choices always so well picked; this one is so rife with inner turmoil. My condolences if this describes the crucible you live within, but what gold you have forged in this powerful poem. Congratulations to you on this excellent write of forgiveness, resentment, and desire ~ John
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:27:00 PM
wow.... this is powerful Lu Loo...great imagery and metaphor... love the ending.. congrats on your top win... hugs
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Date: 2/12/2020 7:17:00 AM
thank you sweet lady! be blessed x:-)
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