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autumn’s rhapsody... whispers of sweet contentment drifts on flitting leaves amidst barren trees languid evensong quivers… rhythmic in motion Laura Loo’s Autumn Haiku Contest 9.20.2016

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Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2016 7:05:00 PM

Two nice haiku - both done in American form! Nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/24/2016 2:21:00 AM

I am certain that you paint as well... great painting of words.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 3:52:00 PM

Your words paint a peaceful scene, Nette. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings!

Moon Flower

Date: 9/21/2016 2:01:00 PM

One word: Brilliant Congrats, Nette. ;)

Constance La France

Date: 9/21/2016 11:04:00 AM

Nette this is so beautiful and so is your image, Congratulations ~

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/21/2016 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations Nette, lovely work...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/21/2016 2:21:00 AM

Back to tell you how happy I am this is a top winner Nette. Big congratulations! : )

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/20/2016 8:55:00 PM

Love the musical tone, Nette! Congrats!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2016 7:52:00 PM

Back with congrats on a well deserved win, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:22:00 PM

wow, such beauty and i love the picture you put with it, Nette. BIG congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2016 5:16:00 PM

Nette, you will never lose your touch. I am pleased to find myself enjoying the rhythm dancing around your autumn haiku. LINDA

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/20/2016 4:27:00 PM

see this is winner, and rightly so, it is beautiful..

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:15:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 3:56:00 PM

such a beauty for a beauty of a poetess! "rhythmic in motion"...lovely line...congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2016 2:59:00 PM

Stunningly beautiful, nette. Good luck for the contest, this should do very well. Agnes

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/20/2016 11:15:00 AM

Excellent haiku Nette, celebrating the beauty of autumn. What a spectacular way to end it! I hope to see this a top winner! 7 ; )

Gabby Sabre

Date: 9/20/2016 8:53:00 AM

Excellent! Those ah ha last lines of your haiku strings are terrific. I myself enjoy the sound of autumn--melodious, sensitive.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/20/2016 8:03:00 AM

nette, for some reason this poem leaves me feeling lonely. Maybe it's the picture. Naked trees always make me feel lonely. Great haiku!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 5:40:00 AM

Your imagery is so wonderful in every poem I read Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/20/2016 4:23:00 AM

savoring the image you have projected here,Nette.Wonderful read.