Halloween Trees

twisted shadows creep into yards and fertile minds… autumn moon on trees ~~20 Oct 2014~~

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:45:00 PM

This is a spooky one. I like it! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:42:00 PM

that middle line is simply outstanding for me, DAvid. REally setting the Halloween tone. Congrats in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:34:00 PM

I love the imagery David:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:18:00 PM

David-this reminds me of the harvest moon, lovely haiku...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2015 12:49:00 AM

David, Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/28/2014 2:51:00 PM

They do leave impressions on the uneasy mind.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2014 7:09:00 PM

This amazing. YOU , Sir, can write a HAIKU. LoVE it.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/20/2014 8:10:00 PM

A nice master piece of Haiku.Please try more.Thanks.

David Mohn
Date: 10/21/2014 8:57:00 PM

Thanks for the great comment Muhammad