A Lonely Cloud Forsaken

i wandered LONELY as a cloud, wearing rain like a fedora- no sunkiss can be a soft kiss... when stuck in a storm like this f o r s a k e n in the sky- mighty eagles in flight soar, they know i will cease to exist at any moment; for i shall become a shape of another- once baby blue, now grazed inside the grey of day; swirls of loss encompass, and all who see me shall see me no more sacrificing all the sunlight that shined in my eyes- being more than i am shall never be embraced perpendicular passion for life- though ephemeral in holy hosts, the heavens shan’t message ghosts for time dances around my emollient stature, never knowing the fear that may follow- there is no wanting in giving, no preparing for living i seek the rainbow that follows the reign of pain- always feared this day would arrive, the day i become… a LONELY cloud wandering
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “I wandered lonely as a cloud” by William Wordsworth 1.29.20

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Date: 2/5/2020 1:14:00 PM
Lu, congratulations on your win with this lovely write _Constance
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Date: 2/4/2020 4:16:00 AM
Very lovely Luloo. Congratulations on your first place win! I always loved that poem of Wordsworth's. xxoo
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Date: 2/3/2020 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, very well deserve. Hugs eve
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Date: 2/3/2020 7:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, L.L. :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/3/2020 12:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win. Indeed, we sometimes become as lonely as cloud.
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Date: 2/2/2020 10:32:00 PM
Melancholy but a lovely picture of a person that never gives up! Congratulations LuLoo!
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:58:00 PM
Did you get my soupmail?
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. I wonder what it would be like to be "a LONELY cloud wandering" in the sky. Have a great day..................
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Date: 2/2/2020 11:45:00 AM
this is beautiful Lu Loo...i love where the theme took you... congratulations on your first place win... hugs
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Date: 2/2/2020 7:44:00 AM
I see why you placed first, Luloo! Love this: perpendicular passion for life- though ephemeral in holy hosts, the heavens shan’t message ghosts/ Congrats, dear friend!
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Date: 2/2/2020 9:16:00 AM
thank you sweet Kim! x:-)
Date: 2/2/2020 6:33:00 AM
When i click on your poem, I cannot see all of it due to a big banner??? I see this line inspired a lot of poets in this contest... just like you.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/2/2020 9:16:00 AM
Sometimes my pics get larger after I post them for some reason? Idk.... I deleted it lol Thank you so much, I am honored, this was actually one of my fave contests by you! You are an inspiration to many. Thank you again x:-)
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