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Mission statement: I don’t use AI to generate or even tweak my poetry, because I am a better poet than it.

Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak.

I have a number of poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime (listed here on PoetrySoup), as well as Suzette sonnet.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9
  6. NEW: moonwake - Suzette Prime poetry, ISBN 978-1-0370-1836-7(PDF). It is a collection of 61 Suzette Prime poetry spanning from 2012 (when I designed the poetic form), up till now.

Punctuation

Blog Posted:11/8/2023 12:09:00 AM

An exclamation mark in a poem or text is as irritating as canned laughter!



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Date: 11/9/2023 9:30:00 PM
No dog in this "fight", but punctuation in poetry should just be the poet's choice. Why rules against perfectly acceptable language usage? Respectfully, I would say "no issue" and proceed to write as one is inspired. More $.02, in an inflationary year. :o)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 11/10/2023 2:09:00 AM
Now divide that number by 20 and you will get to the value of the Rand against the dollar :) I'm not picking on anyone -- just my personal preference, Arlo.l
Date: 11/9/2023 10:37:00 AM
I try to avoid them but always and never are not in my vocabulary, except, like you, canned laughter is a total turn off for me - I'll run from that!!
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Date: 11/9/2023 6:59:00 PM
:)
Date: 11/9/2023 2:53:00 AM
In my view, if we are using commas and full stops then perhaps exclamation marks are also in order if appropriate to the text. If we are not using punctuation at all, then of course exclamation marks should not be there either.
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Date: 11/9/2023 3:42:00 AM
Mmmmm Good point, Seeker. Being consistent in an individual poem is desirable, but not necessarily desired by the poet across all their poetry.
Date: 11/8/2023 9:52:00 AM
I don't take exception to exclamation marks. Only if they are overused.
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:35:00 AM
The fine line...
Date: 11/8/2023 9:19:00 AM
If a poem has a good flow, I do not think punctuation is needed. I only try to use it when the cadence is off. My .02 cents.
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:27:00 PM
Just pulling your leg, Dan. I miss your banter here - glad you are back :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/8/2023 4:23:00 PM
OK Ill take a leg:) Im not going to argue. Im fairly certain most poets/writers always punctuate quotations, correctly. If one is going to use quotation marks, I think it's safe to say they would also use a comma inside of them if needed . Don't you think?
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:37:00 AM
Good point. "Let's eat grandma." :)
Date: 11/8/2023 8:27:00 AM
i'll be the dissenting voice and say i have nothing against exclamation marks! sylvia plath peppered her late work with them and it didn't do her any harm..i like to mix things up a bit, sometimes i leave punctuation out, more often i use it, but it depends on the style and subject matter..there is a general trend in modern poetry towards using less punctuation, but i think punctuation can enhance a poem, and add clarity
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:42:00 AM
All good points, Charlotte. The exclamation mark, though...? Hey, each to his own :)
Date: 11/8/2023 4:11:00 AM
It depends on the type of poem and the emotions that may be expressed in them. I like poems with or without punctuation. Most of mine do not have any. There are poetry forms that do need it though. I love exclamation marks in humorous poems.
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:37:00 AM
I respect your prefernce, Tania. But that is exactly my point (no pun intended): An exclamation mark in a funny sketch is like telling me I must laugh at the punchline, even if I don't find it funny. I used to enjoy the old sitcoms before they introduced canned laughter. When a character delivered a line with a deadpan face, I found it more humorous.
Date: 11/8/2023 4:07:00 AM
DAMMIT!!!!! i just found it on the keyboard......beware they'll be coming for your colon's next....is a semi-colon a half-assed attempt at punctuation??? I'm off to question the question mark (full stop)
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 11/8/2023 2:14:00 AM
Oh wow i thought i was the only one, i find exclamation marks offensive in texts, maybe im too sensitive :/ i used to do exclamation marks in poetry when i used to just rant, now i find it a bit out of place
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:38:00 AM
You are not alone ... :)
Date: 11/8/2023 2:03:00 AM
I’ve come to disregard punctuation in poetry. I’d prefer to see none rather than too much or in the wrong place. What bothers me more is run on sentences.
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:39:00 AM
The latter needs some skill, I admit.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2023 2:18:00 AM
And your last sentence just proved that. ;-)
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 2:14:00 AM
Yes - punctuation gets in the way if feeling it. True about run on sentences - some people can do it and make it work and sometimes I do it and it doesn't work and I know it...
Date: 11/8/2023 1:31:00 AM
It's only end of line exclamation marks that get me - I feel there might be power in the sudden jolt within a poem. Generally with one word... Have I done it? Can't remember. I agree about the prompt the laugh being awkward. I'm free and easy with punctuation though ~ ta da! I'm not an expert haha (just admitting I'm laughing at my own joke, no expectation to laugh with me) :D
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:42:00 AM
You are too funny (colonialism - not to be taken literally) ... Yes, any punctuation mark mid-sentence might enhance the reader's experience, but it is not really my style.
Date: 11/8/2023 12:50:00 AM
I totally disagree!!!!!!!!!!!! But each to their own:-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/8/2023 3:12:00 PM
I am with you, Jan.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 11/8/2023 12:50:00 AM
Hiehiehie ... Satire at it's best?????
Date: 11/8/2023 12:28:00 AM
It's not that I disagree but I do remember you being a huge advocate of poets choice? I actually do agree, my teeth don't go on edge they fall out and have to be glued back in never to be the same again. (Although I do deem that a me problem) How do you feel about question marks - I leave them to the imagination in poems mostly...
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:53:00 AM
See my reply above .... Yes, poets have freedom (up to a point), then the reader takes over:) I just don't like being told when to laugh, especially if it is not funny. What do you say;)

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