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Yellow

old newspapers, stacked, saved yellow and crumble with age something significant, lost if touched chemical reaction with mere air maybe once it was there for all to see an element of fame, recognition but the elements just require the passage of time that, you, I, we all fade until there's just a sense of where we stood but the spaces are empty even the words on stone begin to disappear bright white to yellow raised to indistinct to a faded memory of a memory I'll try not to disappear too soon just because I know my fate I won't unnecessarily scratch my name the strands that remain are part of the plan second chances if I don't play my part and it matters not what is written in ink or stone the marks are made along the line accolades or apologies all shape the story told too slowly to follow are we remembering the moment we crumbled? indelible memory stacked and saved that cannot hold up to touch view it gently read the lines visible take it in exist during your moment in time and don't agitate this world around you it'll collapse around you it's yellowed and old God help us, them from the elements that break us down

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Date: 4/22/2024 6:14:00 AM
Dilly, congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, Constance
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Date: 4/22/2024 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Constance x
Date: 4/21/2024 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very creative. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/22/2024 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Sara, appreciated x
Date: 4/19/2024 12:48:00 PM
- We all fade with time ... we become "yellow" like old newspaper :))) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - Have a lovely weekend, D.D. :) -hugs
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Date: 4/19/2024 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise - it's tough to know what headlines really matter after all's told. Thank you for your kind words x
Date: 4/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Yellow" write. I like how you took it in a different direction. Good Ending.... Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/19/2024 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate you taking a look. Glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 4/18/2024 8:06:00 PM
I liked this different slant of the concept yellow. Yellowing with age is a pertinent reminder that nothing lasts, as you have stated. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/18/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Hilda, it's fun to start a poem and see what happens. Thanks for your well wishes x
Date: 4/18/2024 9:44:00 AM
A mixture of entropy and information Dilly, one destructive the other indestructible, this one makes me ponder life as the go between, we try to juggle these forces whilst availing of both, a beautifully crafted piece, with very deep undertones of reality, cheers David
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Date: 4/18/2024 10:46:00 AM
You are a star David, I feel all clever now :) I was just reading about cellulose in newspaper breaking down and remembered the yellow contest so had a go to see what I'd write. Glad it was ponder worthy - thank you :)

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