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Winter Haiku

__ icicles melt as gray skies reveal sunlight winding creek swells __ Poet-Rick Parise

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2012 2:59:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed ..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 3:41:00 PM

Great haiku, Rick. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:02:00 PM

BIG congratulations (again), rick. I love how you worded your middle line . Such a poetic way to say the grey day got nicer!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:35:00 PM

congrats Rick on an awesome win for splendid words luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Rick. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:45:00 PM

RICK~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/19/2011 5:31:00 PM

A tardy congrats on your 1st place...BG

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/19/2011 3:44:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place win with this vivid wintry scene...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:07:00 PM

This is AWESOME. Congrats, Rick!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/17/2011 5:23:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Rick! Liked the (brrrrrr) feel of this one. Sounds like my neighbourhood in Janurary. :-) I live in the city, but beside Laurel Creek.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/15/2011 2:57:00 PM

Awesome write,Rick.Congratulations on your well deserved win......

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/15/2011 2:27:00 PM

Hi Rick~This is freeeeezing cold and beautiful...I had to put my winter coat and scarf on just to read it!! ha ha. I am so happy to so you have a knack for this form..Debbie worked with me on mine and with 3 revisions, I felt like I was learning Latin all over again. I enjoyed 2 images from your haiku-a winding fairytale creek and bands of light breaking thru these winter clouds. Congrats on this awesome win, friend. Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2011 8:44:00 AM

The WINNER and fine champion!! [even if you did title it ;)] just like Basho ..plain as oatmeal!! yeah! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/7/2011 4:07:00 PM

GOOD Huzzah! [our master teacher just told us --or .. or :] is what is traditionally used as a cut indicator!Please soup mail me if you'd like to work in our facebook haiku group Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/15/2011 8:42:00 AM

oops as often happens I misunderstood he doesn't use the :

Jack Horne

Date: 11/7/2011 3:04:00 PM

lovely haiku, Rick. Thanks - loved your contest : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2011 2:10:00 PM

Good one..I can see the scene from the description..Good luck in the contest..Sara