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Wind Touching Orange Leaves

~ wind touching orange leaves - trickling through the fig tree autumn rain ~ ____________________________ Kigo - autumn rain / fig tree 5/7/3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/22/2011 12:38:00 PM
Such a lovely image, Rick. I wish I had seen this earlier, but am so glad to see your poem winning in Brian's contest. Congratulations! Love and blessings for a Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2011 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 9:07:00 PM
This is wonderful Rick.Keen observation of nature in poetic words.Best wishes.
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Date: 11/21/2011 4:40:00 AM
Many congrats on your big place win in the contest.cheers
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:56:00 PM
Well written Rick. Congratulations on your win in Brain's contest
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Date: 11/20/2011 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Rick on third place win.. for another dynamic write luv,,,,
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Date: 11/20/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations Rick on your beautiful Haiku. Worthy present , my friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/20/2011 4:11:00 PM
Nice Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2011 11:16:00 AM
lovely haiku, Rick
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Date: 11/19/2011 6:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem, and have sent mail..! am busy right now will respond asap yours Joe..!
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Date: 11/17/2011 9:47:00 PM
TWO kigo, Rick, That is pretty keen!! very pretty one.
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Date: 11/17/2011 1:30:00 PM
nice one Rick, if for a contest , best of luck
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Date: 11/17/2011 3:52:00 PM
Brian's contest
Date: 11/17/2011 1:20:00 PM
I think the nicest part of this poem is how it gives the tree some life of its own. A subtle indirect personification, great imagery too Rick.
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