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I rose early, quietly slipping into my walking clothes. I gently opened my front door and headed towards the nearby walking trails. As I walked through the woods, nary an animal crossed my path. The only sounds I heard were birds chirping, small animals collecting nuts, and my feet as they gently landed on autumn’s leaves and the decaying pine straws. I rounded the bend and watched the birds above me fly through the ever-developing canvas of the dawn as if their wings were fine quills, drawing buoyant hues. I paused just in time to witness the sun’s gradual ascent into the enormous Texas sky. Earth’s star rose on the horizon, bold and free, not needing an invitation, bringing warmth to the wooded area. I stood perfectly still letting the silence envelop me. I closed my eyes, lingering in the solitude and quieting my mind. In the distance I heard them—geese honking. Their sounds returned me to the here and now and to my surroundings. I shielded my eyes and looked up. High above me in the blue air was a skein of wild geese flying in V-formation. They glided together effortlessly through the sky, homeward bound for the season. I stood in awe watching them noticing the geese had a pride about them, as if they were aware of their own magnificence.
fall equinox brings skein of geese flying above interrupts silence wild geese, sunlit sky V-formation heading south seasonal journey boldly unimpressed by opinions, fears, and doubts geese trust the Knowing

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Date: 9/26/2023 6:05:00 AM
I can picture the sight in the Texas sky Sara. Your imagery is outstanding and I love "...the geese had a pride about them, as if they were aware of their own magnificence..." Fabulous my friend! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 1:26:00 PM
Thank you my poet friend for stopping by and watching the geese with me. Geese are truly magnificent creatures. I'm glad you appreciate that line. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/24/2023 3:20:00 PM
Enjoyed the imagery you convey through your morning walk, Sara. Every detail brings forth the sights and sounds for the reader. Splendid write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 3:47:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay, for stopping by. I'm grateful you appreciate the imagery...I wanted to take the reader on the journey with me, so I'm guessing I accomplished that :-) Thanks for journeying with me. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 9/24/2023 9:48:00 AM
Your string of Haikus is a succinct summary of prose, Sara. I especially love the last line ... "geese trust the Knowing". I think I should do that more myself. Thanks for sharing your lovely haibuns with us, my Eastside writing bear. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 1:07:00 PM
oh my westside writing bear, I do so look forward to your thoughtful comments. I, too, should trust the internal Knowing more myself. We try, though. hugs, me
Date: 9/24/2023 5:23:00 AM
Splendid prose and haikus. I love the sight of geese flying in the V formation. Great imagery.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 7:49:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments. I, too, am in awe of geese flying in Vformation. Just amazing! Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/24/2023 4:48:00 AM
"I rounded the bend and watched the birds above me fly through the ever-developing canvas of the dawn as if their wings were fine quills," -- beautiful imagery! The entire poem a delight to read. Your vivid, well chosen and finely dabbed words are a gallery of fine art. Write on!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 7:51:00 AM
Wow, Joe, thank you for your wonderful comments. Your compliments touched especially finely dabbed words are a gallery of fine art. What a poetic and beautiful thing to say. Thank you! Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/24/2023 3:59:00 AM
How beautiful and flawless is this haibun! You are truly a gifted poetess and very experienced too, you can keep the readers hooked and captivated and intrigued till the end, from the very first line. The way you’ve painted imagery and the flow of the descriptive lines truly left me in awe! I love the haiku too at the end. And i felt like i saw this happen right with you beautiful sara! Fave for me again! You are truly a very versatile poetess, love this
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 4:05:00 AM
Ink, I always look forward to reading your heartfelt comments. They touch me and verify what I hope to do when writing a poem. I guess imagery is my thing :-) I'm grateful you were engaged from the get go. I appreciate you, dear poet friend. Thanks for faving it too. That means a great deal. Have a 'super' Sunday, Sara

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