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What Lies Beneath

What lies beneath the nuptial necropolis? Sun-glints of memory, warm rays of kinder days, tranquil as the soil-sleepers before they broke the coffin confines and howled free. What lies beneath the crying cairns? The pearling bones, bone-pearls of scattered skulls and souls. Draughts of the dead sculling frothing tides of Queen Anne's lace - tomb festoons of bridal lace, undulating umbels purling the marriage mausoleum. Beneath the wedding whiteout I thought was daylight, into the nightlight where we stumbled like sleepwalkers. And here rattled the homing bones, the family ivory; we could hear their unrest, scraping at loam. What lies beneath the soil clots that coffin-clattered like stones? Your father - black-rotten in his coffin. Borstal bastard knife slicing his sister's fingers; her blood a rushing ruby stream, her pain a scarlet scream. What lies beneath the old corpse copse, the sentient sentinel trees? Roots driving deep, roots of you; yew roots sprawling to clacking skeletal maws, to tangle and twine strangling the choke-ivy shrine. Taproots creeping through terra, groping for the black growth of father terror; the bone-burrow death that puppeted him puppeting you; now you lie with his voice, your eyes a green glaze he gazes through. Root-threads that wove and wed us, their tumorous tubers riddling the rancid soil where souls lie soiled and ache blue-bloat bruises - contusions of the broken child who lies in confusion beneath the facade of indifference, the dark father fist.

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Date: 12/24/2023 7:37:00 AM
I have often thought, you visit parliament And here it is the very truth.' I suggest a Change, for the sake of your mind, lest you Get de-ranged, I doubt you'll listen even so? But the pass seems quite sore; so I gave it a go' All the best for Christmas.!
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Date: 12/5/2023 7:13:00 AM
Brilliant poem. Congratulations
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Date: 12/4/2023 2:46:00 PM
An excellent write Charlotte, hurt a child, hurt the rest of their life, unless one is mended by the love of a partner in life. Congratulations on your win in Tom’s contest. Belle
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Date: 12/4/2023 9:28:00 AM
Extremely well-written, Charlotte, very macabre Vincent Price meets Ronald Coleman. Congratulations on your win! visceral excruciation is palpable. I Am Anaya
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:34:00 AM
this is so awesome. surprisingly (for you) i felt more poe here than plath. in any other context this is an epic write, dear Charlotte. thank you for entering and for your outstanding effort
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Date: 11/29/2023 8:32:00 AM
Fathers, who would have them. Some kids never make it, and you can see why.
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/1/2023 6:58:00 AM
It's tough for abused kids. Living with it is bad enough, but at some point they'll be told they might abuse their own kids. I don't know why this is, cos I'm sure anyone is capable of abuse.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 11/29/2023 2:52:00 PM
yes indeed..the poem is based around my ex husband's abusive childhood; the damage inflicted echoes down through the years and affects relationships..i was tapping into the plath/daddy thing, whilst at the same time making the poem personal to me
Date: 11/27/2023 8:41:00 AM
There is a lot of dark imagery in your poem, is this for Tommy's Plat/Poe contest? You vocabulary is very strong and it is evident here in how you used words for descriptive purposes.. Excellent poem Charlotte..
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Date: 11/26/2023 8:46:00 PM
This is absolutely stunning. I love your wordplay, and flow of this especially love the lines “ puppeting you; now you lie with his voice, your eyes a green glaze he gazes through. Root-threads that wove and wed us, their tumorous tubers“ these lines hit the hardest for me. Theres something very uniquely artistic about the way you weave emotions. Im sure this will be w top winner. Pleasure reading this
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Date: 11/26/2023 3:45:00 PM
a brilliantly written and perceptive poem, Charlotte...I'm in awe of your poetic talent here....Thanks for sharing your words and your poetic brilliance, Sara
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Date: 11/26/2023 3:19:00 PM
Wow! perceptive, yet so very much the Poe, Plath - yet original in its own right. WOW, just WOW. Should win the contest! If that is what its for. If not, it could easily be... much love and prayers, Gina
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