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What Is That Taste In My Mouth

No warning. BOOM! The taste spread swiftly around the room. Eyes scour. They pinpoint the doom. A little old lady Who's big on perfume.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 7/27/2017 12:24:00 PM
I love the conglomeration and linking between the couplet. Lovely!
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:48:00 AM
Deb I'm still getting around to tweet linking the winners poetry list pages. So here goes.
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Date: 4/17/2017 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on your placing. My smile at reading this wonder is winder than my ears are placed. I also showed a friend at work who was most impressed. I've got a few days off now, so to the promotion trail. Scott
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Date: 4/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
oh how I can relate Deb - yeuk it can be totally overpowering!:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2017 8:55:00 PM
Well-done - congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/18/2017 9:39:00 AM
Clever , frugal write, like it
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Deb Adams
Date: 3/18/2017 10:18:00 AM
I appreciate that, ty!