Get Your Premium Membership

What Is That Taste In My Mouth

No warning.
BOOM!

The taste spread swiftly
around the room.

Eyes scour.
They pinpoint the doom.

A little old lady
Who's big on perfume.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 7/27/2017 12:24:00 PM
I love the conglomeration and linking between the couplet. Lovely!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/4/2017 9:48:00 AM
Deb I'm still getting around to tweet linking the winners poetry list pages. So here goes.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2017 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on your placing. My smile at reading this wonder is winder than my ears are placed. I also showed a friend at work who was most impressed. I've got a few days off now, so to the promotion trail. Scott
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
oh how I can relate Deb - yeuk it can be totally overpowering!:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2017 8:55:00 PM
Well-done - congrats on your placement!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2017 9:39:00 AM
Clever , frugal write, like it
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Deb Adams
Date: 3/18/2017 10:18:00 AM
I appreciate that, ty!