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Wasted Away

Days turned into years Gone are the buds once vibrant Life can’t be reversed

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/19/2022 6:54:00 PM

The body decays but souls eternal, recognised as our bubbling innocence, defying gravity :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/26/2021 12:08:00 PM

Great haiku poem my dear sister of God's inspirational grace, Sarah. I love the words and the impact of the message. Great job. Please have a wonderful day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you, your loved ones, endevours, and family members always!

Diane Perna

Date: 10/25/2021 5:20:00 PM

Profound! Love this!

Michael Mc Dermott

Date: 10/25/2021 12:33:00 PM

This poem reminds us of precious time moving along, and with it our lives. well done.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 10/25/2021 10:16:00 AM

Time is our treasure, gone but not forgotten.

Joanna Feltham

Date: 10/25/2021 9:55:00 AM

I really enjoyed your Haiku. Great imagery. Thank you for sharing. :-)

Franci Hoffman

Date: 10/25/2021 9:18:00 AM

My kind of poem, Sarah! Powerful brevity! Excellent haiku!

John Gondolf

Date: 10/25/2021 8:30:00 AM

You feel this so much more when you reach your "golden Years." I feel it more and more every day. Your words speak the truth, Sarah. I look forward to reading more of your work. JOhn

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/25/2021 8:19:00 AM

Sadly true, Sarah. I feel the weight of lost opportunity from wasted time. A well written posting here relevant to many of us. Best wishes, Brian