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Treasure

In solitude of all wild thoughts Twirling and meandering in my mind My ingenuity traces out a slender slope As I see the abstracts take mystic form The stories within me design a stream My imagination is running the currents Oh, to witness the birth of new wonders How meticulously each word is shaped And the impeccable carving that gives rise To the treasure flowing out of my pen~ 13th April 2023 Contest: Writing Challenge T words Sponsored by Constance La France

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/7/2023 3:38:00 PM

My friend , the closing couplet is like the icing on a beautiful cake! Entire poem is truly a jewel. A fav.. God bless..

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 6/12/2023 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, Robert! I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 5/15/2023 8:51:00 AM

What a lovely poem. Akanksha. A well deserved number 1. Congratulations!

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/16/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sandra.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/15/2023 4:40:00 AM

A stream of thoughts and feeling flowing from within the shrines. Congratulations!

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/16/2023 7:28:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 5/15/2023 12:19:00 AM

Lovely poem. Well written.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/15/2023 4:33:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your read and compliment

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/10/2023 6:36:00 AM

Oh wow! @ #1 best poem position! Congratulations!

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/10/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much! Your words blessed my day.

Barb Gar

Date: 5/2/2023 7:34:00 AM

Surely being able to write poetry from within is letting out your treasured talents. Words here completed perfectly your thoughts.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/15/2023 4:34:00 AM

Yes, they did. Everytime, I read it, I feel the exact way I want to. Thank you!

Jay Narain

Date: 4/25/2023 11:58:00 AM

Nicely penned. You are a winner,

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/25/2023 5:24:00 PM

I am happy you think so. Thank you for visiting and the compliments !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/24/2023 6:48:00 PM

Brilliant images, beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/25/2023 2:22:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/24/2023 8:23:00 AM

Lovely magical write filled with splendors and birthing ! Congratulations dear Akanksha on your win and best new poem ! Susan :)

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/24/2023 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, Susan! For the visit and lovely comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2023 11:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Akanksha :) - hugs

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/17/2023 5:29:00 PM

Thank you :) Always good to hear from you, SS.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/17/2023 10:20:00 AM

This is a lovely reflection on your creative process Akanksha filled with so many wonderful, ingenious images. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/17/2023 5:28:00 PM

I believe every piece of art is conceived in the same manner which makes it a marvel in itself. Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/16/2023 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day/week..................

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/17/2023 2:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula! It is always a good day when I hear from you

Constance La France

Date: 4/15/2023 3:01:00 PM

Akanksha, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/16/2023 3:12:00 AM

Thank you Constance. I am sorry to know that your contests are not appreciated by some in PS. Their criticism makes no sense. People regularly participate in your challenges and as of myself, I await it. Continue organising your creative contests!

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/15/2023 11:38:00 AM

"And the impeccable carving that gives rise To the treasure flowing out of my pen~" Oh, I like these two lines the are very beautiful .It's a very nice poem.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/15/2023 1:28:00 PM

Thank you Christine for visiting and appreciating my poem :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/15/2023 9:44:00 AM

Sweet treasure indeed Akanksha. Congratulations on your win! :)

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/15/2023 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Linda!