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Top of the World Haiku

___________________________________ misty fog lifts atop pristine jagged rocks- one morning star shine ___________________________________ A Skat Sponsored Contest 4/7/5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Rick. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:40:00 AM

RICK ANOTHER , congratualtions this time on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/16/2011 10:10:00 AM

A true beautiful scene !! Congrats my friend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 7:54:00 AM

Congrats Rick on a super second place with this vivid beauty so expressive my friend.. thankxx for all your help yesterday and for the kudos on Passion and Ash.. appreciate much.. blessings..luv..

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:45:00 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/9/2011 4:00:00 PM

This Haiku is perfect for the contest. Rick, thank you for my placement in your Autumn Dream Contest. I am adding you to my fav poet list. Maybe I already have? Well if I didn't already I am now.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 11:46:00 PM

This is really pretty! Why don't you say shines with an "s"? I am feeling it like a verb!(did you mean it for noun?)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2011 5:17:00 PM

I can just see the scene from the description..Enjoyed very much..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Your presence there is appreciated..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/8/2011 2:58:00 PM

A'ho a'ho one morning...as the misty fog was a' liifting.....wooOH..........CRASH..! you forgot to post a warning sign.. .RICK...and there's jagged rocks at the bottom also, you didn't mention that either..! Ill bet you work in tourism promotion do you..? Oh.! all the best anyway Joe..