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To Prejudice the Dawn -CT

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At first I wrote this to a contest for Charles Messina  but I read the definition of light verse which Charles suggested for the contest.  I am awful with humor so decided it doesn’t fit the
guidelines but I did have fun writing it. I won’t enter it on those grounds. 

 

 

To Prejudice the Dawn -CT

Blackbird, winter moon, small echo of death
Starlight, lord of beauty, time stands still
The quality of mercy, mind and heart
life accelerated, how to slow down time
eyes of Mother Nature. her immortal sadness
equilibrium, controlled fallacy, 
self knowledge in the aftermath
A poet’s impasse, the shape of death
to be a part of landscape, conjuring up a world
the pain of too much beauty,  how to die
earth mother, song of rain, she is nature
sketch of a dream, angel wings, guardians of forever
I am listening for you, the source of being,
when dawn returns, as seasons dance
stars splash, spring light, spirit of dreams
dialogue of Autumn, dialogue of place
every beautiful thing, touching evolution
shaping life,  as utopia sleeps,to transmogrify,
directive for a new day, winter leaf dance

Collaboration of your Titles Poetry Contest
Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/22/2019 12:42:00 PM
well gives a sense of longing a time and space thank you for your kind words on mind David x
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/22/2019 2:07:00 PM
Hi David: Nice to have you visit. Best, SuZ
Date: 8/6/2019 4:29:00 AM
Very interesting, Suzanne! Such beautiful phrases and images pouring out in a delightful stream; until the seeming incongruity at some points made me wonder if you had used a computer algorithm to create the mix (no criticism; the result is stlll impressive) then I saw from your note the explanation of the source(s). A brilliant outcome! Very well done’
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/6/2019 5:48:00 AM
Hi Geoffrey: Yes, interesting exercise. Anything these days to get me writing. Best, SuZ
Date: 8/1/2019 2:18:00 AM
This is very beautiful SuZ. You can use this for the PFT August Poetry Challenge I will soon post. I love it! I know this would have done well in his contest had you entered it. xxoo
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/1/2019 4:42:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Connie: Your encouragement is always appreciated. I am trying to apply myself to writing again now our renovations are finally complete.. Love, SuZ
Date: 7/22/2019 9:38:00 AM
love the detail and description gives a sense of time and space thankyou for your coments on mine not been on here for some time not been well I ahave how ever been reworking a lot of my writes structuring to read better and will be putting them back on here soon xxx
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Date: 7/15/2019 5:39:00 PM
ohh, this is gold, so fluid, suZ... light verse also means it is not overly dramatic... a winner for me..huggs
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/16/2019 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Nette: I probably should have posted it. Oh well at least it got me writing something. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 7/15/2019 7:58:00 AM
You should have entered it SuZ. This is really well orchestrated. Hugs Rick.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/15/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Rick: When I read the description so many of my titles are of the kind I couldn’t make Light Verse with them but it was a great exercise. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 7/11/2019 9:24:00 PM
Absolutely amazing! Spectacular, sophisticated, sublime images.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/12/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Carol: This was a fun one to do. Try it with your titles. It is like a word jigsaw puzzle. Best, SuZ