Thoughts Unclear

it’s the thoughts unclear that evolve to those most dear to the truth they steer

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/7/2023 10:15:00 AM

Yes they do Bill. Hi. Eventually the clouds lift and the truth is clear for us to see and to know. You were clever with thought here. Have a wonderful and peaceful day. Blessings always for all things good. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 3/7/2023 3:40:00 PM

It's nice to hear from those of you that get the message of my poetry. Thanks for reading and commenting my friend. :-) Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/26/2022 12:08:00 PM

Few words with much said. Thoughts/day dreams where will they take one??? Have a blessed day.............

Bill Baker
Date: 5/26/2022 9:40:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, for reading and commenting on my poetry. I appreciate your presence even when I'm busy and inconsistent right now. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/5/2022 10:04:00 AM

It's remarkable how you can convey such a profound reality in such a little amount of syllables. The third line has a strong emotional resonance for me. Bill, you did an excellent job.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/5/2022 1:34:00 PM

Thank you for the comments, Sotto; we are all being led to the truth that we need to evolve on our path. I'm glad this was meaningful for you, my friend. Bill

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/5/2022 8:13:00 AM

Amazing third line! WOWSER! I love it. A fav! Yours, Pangie

Bill Baker
Date: 5/5/2022 1:32:00 PM

If we continue to seek; we'll always find. Thanks for commenting, Pangie. Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/5/2022 1:31:00 AM

lovely thoughts Bill. Many thinkers are not this evolved though.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/5/2022 1:31:00 PM

True, but we write from our own experiences. Thanks for commenting, Caren. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/4/2022 4:40:00 PM

amazing how you can put such a truth in just a few words. Reminds of the saying, "it's always darkest just before dawn." Your poem tells me that unclear thoughts are just leading me to more clarity and often I'm closer to clarity than I think. Did my ramblings make sense?? :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 5/4/2022 7:15:00 PM

Yes, excellent comment, Sara. I like the way you think. Hugs, Bill