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The Old House - 1230 North Rogers Street, Springfield, Missouri, circa 1962.

The old house, built in 1895, was the best of weathered antiques having hugged North Rogers Street from days of horses to days of horse-powered engines, and now to electric cars. As the story goes, my grandfather purchased the old house shortly after returning from WWI. He added ‘indoor’ plumbing, a garage, a carport, remodeled the inside, and replaced the roof—a roof that protected the house and its inhabitants and would do so for many-a-year to come. Granddad moved his wife and four children into the old house, and it was the place my mother, uncles, and aunt grew up, calling it ‘home.’ Later, my cousins, brothers, and I spent many joyful days inside the old house. It was my second ‘home,’ and the calling of the years somehow takes me there. I can remember each room as far back as my memory goes. I can touch them, feel the texture on the walls, smell the scent of Granny’s perfume, and hear Granddad shuffling across the creaking wooden floors. In my daydreams, I’m once again inside the old house where a kaleidoscope of memories greets me—photographs adorn the walls, each of them conjuring the emotions of those moments long-since passed. Though the exterior of the house has suffered many winters and storm seasons, the old wooden floor has been sheltered inside. The floor has been shaped by the soles of our family—of generations living and loving there. It’s as if the house holds onto happy memories in its floorboards and walls, for inside we were safe and warm even on cold, wintry days. Holidays brought family gatherings and a time when the old house was filled with children romping about, holiday shenanigans, abundant laughter, warm drinks, and loads of holiday goodies. I can see a plate of gingerbread cookies resting on Granny’s dining room table. The old table, like the old house, aged with us, becoming more distinct with age. It’s surface now has the face of a beloved old man, as if all those lines were his well-earned wrinkles. When summertime arrived, the backyard was converted to a massive garden that reaped a bountiful harvest—tomatoes, squash, okra, snap peas, and cucumbers picked at just the right time for making crispy bread and butter pickles, Granddad’s favorite. So many precious memories live and breathe inside that old house. I pause from reminiscing, wishing I could somehow roll back the clock, but I can’t. Apparently, I've been the victim of getting older—something that happens to all of us at one point or another. My ‘getting older’ has been going on for quite some time now and without my knowing it! But getting old is sweeter because reminiscing turns back the hands of time. Suddenly, I’m seven again dwelling in the old house enjoying the people with whom memories were made.
how many laughs and how many tears have marked the the years unfolding the floorboard creaks and tells a story of many Christmas holidays here in the kitchen you'll find stories left behind open the cupboard once inside you'll find stained and old recipe cards written with such care sweet memories live forever inside these walls memories do that within these old walls do ghosts hide, keeping secrets-- tales that weren't told of ghosts I don't know I sense their silent presence begging me 'come home'

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Date: 10/22/2023 3:27:00 AM
I love to read about abandoned old houses where memories sleep ! I see before me this old house occupied by your grand dad and grandma. They are already quite familiar to me. Reading this, I too am taken back to my old ancestral house which became orphaned with my parents' death and my brother moving away into the city. I appreciate your heart warming sentiments for your grand parents. To be able to live in an atmosphere of love is indeed a blessing! Love this and into my FAVE.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 4:40:00 AM
ahhh, Valsa, I appreciate your compassionate and sincere remarks. I love old houses, too. An old house was the scene of my first novel, full of secrets and mysteries. I sense you are sincerely connected to my grandparents. I was delighted to hear about your ancestral home. I'm guessing you, too, came from a loving environment...love permeates your heart and soul. Thanks for faving!
Date: 10/21/2023 9:46:00 AM
A touching poem that many will relate to, my grandparents family still live in their homes and have done for over 200 years.. the storytelling here is great, like reading a short novel and the two haiku at the end are brilliant... we always sense the presence of those who have departed..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 2:19:00 PM
thanks for your soft and insightful comments, Silent One. Over 200 years in their homes. That's fabulous and rare. I believe doing so grounds a person on many levels. Thanks for your kind words about my storytelling and Haiku writing. I often sense the presence of those who've departed. I feel fortunate that I do. Thanks for your encouragement and support. Have a splendid Saturday, Sara
Date: 10/21/2023 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful soul, this is so touching and beautiful. The way you’ve described your memories is so detail oriented and soul warming. That must be a picture of your old house? Sometimes i wish i can talk about my childhood like this in such a way reminiscing only the good. You seem to have really good memories and see and appreciate the good in everything, unlike most of us that dwell on the negativities of life. The way you describe people and everything you’ve experienced shows “gratitude” lov ths
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 8:26:00 AM
ahhh, thank you, dear Ink, for your kind comments. I'm grateful you found the poem heart warming. In answer to your question, the old house was my grandfather's house, my 2d home more or less. I'm fortunate; I grew up in a positive home; no yelling, no spanking, tons of patience and joy. As an adult I've had my fair share of negative memories. I just let them go and see them for what they are. Anyway, you're a most kind individual with keen insights into humanity.
Date: 10/21/2023 6:31:00 AM
Dear Sara, your Haikus are absolutely stunning. The way you paint vivid pictures with your words is truly remarkable. I particularly admire how you intricately weave memories into the very fabric of the house, the kitchen, and even the walls. And the idea of ghosts occasionally revealing themselves adds another layer of intrigue to your already extraordinary work.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 8:28:00 AM
thank you, kind Sotto, for your kind comments. I'm grateful you appreciate the intricacies of my writing. Your insight into the written word and the writing process are admirable qualities making you an extraordinary person and poet. I appreciate your words more than I can say. Have a great day, Sara

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