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"I cannot rub the strangeness from my sight I got from looking through a pane of glass I skimmed this morning from the drinking trough" After Apple Picking - Robert Frost when comparing looking through a lens with not there is an awareness much like through the eye of a poet distortion falls away rather than into place and there's an ache from the beauty of a street or a face it's funny what becomes invisible in those moments - arranged beauty disappears it's a feeling that's seen like the essence that existed in a tunnel of time transportation of an echo of myself to a place where I've filled in the outlines with knowledge I hold I saw a man with long hair and a long beard today, tainted yellow from cigarettes his hair though beyond shoulder length held the shape of a long ago hair cut his face troubled as he walked with purpose early in the morning there was a space in time that man was happy and though I passed in my car I felt it tangibly around him but separate from his form/a barrier in place I'd seen poem after poem until that point then they stopped like a line was crossed and grey descended until I arrived then I got the last parking space and messaged my manager that I was late and he said "don't worry, the meeting was cancelled"

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Date: 11/3/2023 11:22:00 PM
What a journey into mirror worlds where the reflected image changes....observations, thoughts, ending in a touch of humour Your ability to make poetry out of such diverse material is amazing DD.
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Date: 11/3/2023 11:53:00 PM
I'm convinced little fairies just danced in my brain putting happy dust in any empty space when I read this - thank you!
Date: 11/2/2023 3:17:00 PM
You’re entering the realm of wormholes here Dilly, observing the past and present spontaneously, and touching on true reality that lies outside of time, not many can express such phenomena, yet alone write a poem about them, quite exceptional, cheers David
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Date: 11/4/2023 12:14:00 AM
Just reread it and it jumped out at me why I put the car parking space and meeting bit in as being connected - it was the sense of lost time where the universe puts a correction in place to right it. It felt relevant but I couldn't put my finger on why
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/2/2023 4:28:00 PM
The bane of my life lol!
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:02:00 PM
Ooh like lucky socks!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/2/2023 3:49:00 PM
Cause and effect no, cause and causality most certainly!
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Date: 11/2/2023 3:27:00 PM
Haha do I make myself laugh or do you make me laugh or are we laughing simultaneously - that is the answer to a question possibly posed before words existed :) imagine what I'd come up with if I actually had an interest in science or science fiction - did the experience influence my last parking space and meeting being called off I wonder?

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