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The Tale of the Late Snail

As I wandered down the lane, I met a snail, quite slow and vain, "I'm late!" it cried, with a mournful strain, "I missed my train, I missed my train!" The sun in the sky did brightly shine, But the snail was held back by its own design, Its sluggish pace, a hindrance so divine, That it couldn't even catch up to the swine. Oh, how I laughed at that snail so proud, Its pointless worries, so silly and loud, But then I thought, with a voice so endowed, "Slow and steady wins the race," I avowed. So let the snail crawl at its own pace, For in the end, it will win the race, And though it may seem like a hopeless case, Its journey is worth not one ounce of disgrace.

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Date: 3/26/2023 2:17:00 AM
Enjoyed the tale of the snail . In a way being slow is preferable to being in 'sick hurry'. I feel your snail is wise enough. Love your highly rhyming poem, Kabutha.
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:18:00 PM
Kabutha, I enjoyed this superbly written, entertaining poem with a moral. Best wishes. :)
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Kabutha Hempstone
Date: 3/23/2023 9:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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