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The Shape of Dreams

…the shape of dreams …ocean glass blunted drunk on pebble tumble by deep winter wave mortal cut sparks of fire effervescent stirs in old memory colors tossed beautiful with the flick of the sun nimble cheek kisses on cold wind find a wandering tear

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/14/2024 5:00:00 AM

Well composed. Enjoyed in full. Keep it up. Blessings.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/15/2024 1:11:00 PM

thank you and blessings to you as well

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/9/2024 7:48:00 AM

Your poem demonstrates impeccable artistry and skill. It is truly a work of beauty, Mat. Your distinct and original expression is a delightful experience for readers. Wishing you continued success and inspiration.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/9/2024 7:38:00 PM

thank you kindly

Sand Blown

Date: 1/1/2024 11:23:00 AM

...nice write.....reminds one of long past adventurous watching lightning over the lake.....stan

Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:43:00 PM

a warm memory - thank you for sharing

Ink Empress

Date: 12/29/2023 3:44:00 AM

I love your opening line, Shape of dreams, ocean glass. Very creative and unique start to a deep and intriguing write. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light

Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:42:00 PM

light to you as well

Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM

This is truly beautiful, Mat. Your way of putting things is unique and quite frankly quite a pleasue to read. All the best for your writing in the new year!

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:55:00 PM

all the best to you also, paige

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/27/2023 4:06:00 PM

powerful poem. I especially liked 'stirs in old memory colors tossed beautiful.' I find that to be true. Delight imagery and I thought the last three words had significant impact. Well done, Mat. Have a great evening, Sara

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:55:00 PM

to you as well a peaceful evening

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2023 6:21:00 AM

this one is deep..

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM

thank you

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 12/27/2023 1:43:00 AM

Great the way you've put these words together to suggest the shape of dreams, good write Mat

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/27/2023 7:54:00 PM

take care