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The Ramped Heavens

Kashmir is the heaven as they say
Fom years i have been watching deaths at the bay
Some come with metals,some burn the petals
Here you are safer only if you stay dumb
With all oppression i am numb 
Guns they carry like  peacemaking gadgets 
Bombs they drop like ingle bells 
Music to ears their canister shells
Blinded children and wailing mums
Democracy long back was locked in drums
No where I find my childhood chums 
I will write and speak unless to all the oppressed freedom comes 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/28/2015 6:01:00 PM
The world is full of sorrows. All the best for you.
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 9/3/2015 5:26:00 PM
HEY matta ty for you time tough
Date: 8/27/2015 8:30:00 AM
So true hate rots you from within and seldom worries who or what you hate at all while love heals & sets you on a path to growth-love creates an endless universe-hate a bottomless hole! Light & Love
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 8/28/2015 2:09:00 PM
THANK YOU debbie , your words are just a lesson to me..love@burningsoulz
Date: 4/30/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Kamran, Much appreciated :)
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Date: 4/28/2015 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Kamran for reading my poems. I wish for peace everywhere
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 4/29/2015 1:05:00 PM
thank you for finding some time ,,wish you the same Nagmeh may allah bestow you and us all and guide us to the best
Date: 4/9/2015 9:18:00 PM
May God protect all the honest people. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, thanks for sharing ,and for visiting my page, much appreciated. Fatima
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 4/29/2015 1:06:00 PM
thank you fatima
Date: 4/8/2015 2:47:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Tfs
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 4/8/2015 9:41:00 AM
thank you for getting the thought,, i would love to read some from you sir as its alwz soulful ,nd a blessing#
Date: 4/8/2015 2:02:00 AM
your poem depicted so many emotions in one flow. i've been to kashmir , its a beautiful place to be in but its also true that people grow up way to fast there. loved your poem truly. Manya
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 4/8/2015 12:54:00 PM
also true that people grow up way to fast there.,,than kyou manya
Date: 4/7/2015 5:55:00 AM
"Here you are safer only if you stay dumb" .. it became universal rule unfortunately :)
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Date: 4/1/2015 3:34:00 AM
That's great! I heard & read about the nature & people' beauty in Kashmir.
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:33:00 AM
I always admire Kashmir's charms so i found this poem very appealing. People keep provoking and oppressing the muslims then muslims react ah. Evrybody's jealous of muslims. War is destroyin the appeal of kashmir as yor great poem tels in brevity. Thumbs up and so nice to read u again. Tnx 4 yer coment too.
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KAMRAN RASHID
Date: 3/31/2015 12:01:00 PM
it is not only evrbdy,, iguess we also..we need to be 1#and tnkyou fr your time,understanding and love i hope we will bring good thngs out and i really wish to write somethng accrdngly wth u looking forward