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The Poet Reclining

Inspired by the painting The Poet Reclining, by Marc Chagall 1915 Viewing the painting will support making sense of the images in the poem. The painting was done during the painters honeymoon as the First World War began. This is just my interpretation. Outstretched From artist, to poet Recline Take a breath With faded pallor and quiet contemplation Knowing, to turn, is all that is required Face the World From this unreal place Of fir trees and animals grazing The war to end war Out of sight What do I see, feel, imagine Are these my efforts Do they contribute I lay my head in comfort But my mind bears the weight Of the unseen World Never held at bay But it's not here I cradle myself and my dreams Until morning A Strand No 1201 Poetry Contest 20th March 2023 Sponsored by: Brian Strand 10th place

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Date: 4/13/2023 9:39:00 AM
DD, I do love your ekphrasis. Your exploration into the painting has a depth that is enchanting - phrases like "my head bears the weight." Each line is one to savor. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of the Easter season to you.
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Date: 4/13/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Sam - it must have been a difficult time for everyone, thank you for your kind words
Date: 3/23/2023 5:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and the context behind it through the painting. It truly adds depth to the imagery and emotions portrayed in the poem. Well done!
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Date: 3/24/2023 1:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, glad you liked it
Date: 3/22/2023 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your placing !
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Date: 3/22/2023 10:46:00 PM
Thanks Wen!
Date: 3/22/2023 8:23:00 PM
"With faded pallor and quiet contemplation", "What do I see, feel, imagine Are these my efforts" - a great poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2023 10:46:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/20/2023 10:03:00 AM
All I can say DD is that your poem is better than his painting. He looks like part of a home made fence.
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Date: 3/20/2023 10:40:00 AM
Haha! I was looking past the fence face and feet :)

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